for The Serpents Loss10/1 c10 Firedawg
Great story and full of surprises. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Great story and full of surprises. Looking forward to the next chapter.
7/21 c1 Guest
I hope you continue this story soon. Awesome work!
I hope you continue this story soon. Awesome work!
6/2 c3 Hinny17
John would have been born well before Sirius was sent to Azkaban since he is in the same grade as Harry.
John would have been born well before Sirius was sent to Azkaban since he is in the same grade as Harry.
4/8 c10 stillfreeleader
Finally got a chance to sit down and read the last couple chapters. I'm eagerly waiting more. Hope you're doing well!
Finally got a chance to sit down and read the last couple chapters. I'm eagerly waiting more. Hope you're doing well!
1/31 c10 Lucas
I'm surprised everyone is so calm about harry having a baby. Its almost like they have forgotten what happened the last time a potter had a child during a war. An by the title of the this fanfic there is a high possibility of daphne losing the child.
I'm surprised everyone is so calm about harry having a baby. Its almost like they have forgotten what happened the last time a potter had a child during a war. An by the title of the this fanfic there is a high possibility of daphne losing the child.
2/1 c2 Jaoheah
Wasn't John cast out of his family, meaning he wouldn't be allowed to use Duffy as a last name? Like how Ron was?
Wasn't John cast out of his family, meaning he wouldn't be allowed to use Duffy as a last name? Like how Ron was?
1/28 c10 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Feeling some sympathy for Harry and Daphne with their little situation. Been there, done that. ;-) I'm sure the Lord Greengrass will put them both through the wringer. Looking foward to that! Enjoyed your twist on the discovery of the Gaunt family ring/horcrux. Glad to see that Dumbledore was not harmed by it. Thought that his reaction was spot on with what would have happened in the canon. Good thing that Harry was there. Has Sirius not told his son that he is actually his son yet? Old man Duffy is not going to be happy when he finds out Sirius cuckholded him... Glad to see that Voldemort felt a stab of pain, but the heart? Really? He has a heart? ;-) Just kidding. Enjoyed the chapter! Can't wait to see what's next! And thanks for the quick update!
Excellent chapter! Feeling some sympathy for Harry and Daphne with their little situation. Been there, done that. ;-) I'm sure the Lord Greengrass will put them both through the wringer. Looking foward to that! Enjoyed your twist on the discovery of the Gaunt family ring/horcrux. Glad to see that Dumbledore was not harmed by it. Thought that his reaction was spot on with what would have happened in the canon. Good thing that Harry was there. Has Sirius not told his son that he is actually his son yet? Old man Duffy is not going to be happy when he finds out Sirius cuckholded him... Glad to see that Voldemort felt a stab of pain, but the heart? Really? He has a heart? ;-) Just kidding. Enjoyed the chapter! Can't wait to see what's next! And thanks for the quick update!
1/28 c7 debdeb46
You are a great writer. I love this story I am happy you are back. I am not a writer. But I love to read. For some reason, some people think it's ok to rag on others writing. I believe if you don't like it move on to something else and stop being a jerk. My favorite saying is,Opinions are like A#*holes and everybody has one.
You are a great writer. I love this story I am happy you are back. I am not a writer. But I love to read. For some reason, some people think it's ok to rag on others writing. I believe if you don't like it move on to something else and stop being a jerk. My favorite saying is,Opinions are like A#*holes and everybody has one.
1/28 c7 stillfreeleader
So I've spent every day since thus chapter came out rereading thr story. I legit said "No way!" when your name popped up with a new chapter. I'm so glad your back and updating again! I can't wait to see where this story goes!
So I've spent every day since thus chapter came out rereading thr story. I legit said "No way!" when your name popped up with a new chapter. I'm so glad your back and updating again! I can't wait to see where this story goes!
1/28 c10 
9CaskettFan5
Harry is very lucky she only threw a pillow at him. She must really love him. :)
So the cause of Dumbledore's death won't be canon, interesting. Dumbledore knew about the map all this time? He should have made his own, it would be very useful for the staff (not as good for Harry though, he gets into too much mischief). I'm looking forward to Yuri vs Bellatrix although I know who will win, Bellatrix is too good of an antagonist to kill off early.
They should get a move on, Daniel won't appreciate getting the news late any more than the news itself.
9CaskettFan5Harry is very lucky she only threw a pillow at him. She must really love him. :)
So the cause of Dumbledore's death won't be canon, interesting. Dumbledore knew about the map all this time? He should have made his own, it would be very useful for the staff (not as good for Harry though, he gets into too much mischief). I'm looking forward to Yuri vs Bellatrix although I know who will win, Bellatrix is too good of an antagonist to kill off early.
They should get a move on, Daniel won't appreciate getting the news late any more than the news itself.
1/26 c9 Guest
Loved the new chapter and can't wait to read what's next
Loved the new chapter and can't wait to read what's next
1/28 c9 CaskettFan5
Entropy means everything will expire eventually. She had to tell Harry first but that was the easy one. Her father - now that's going to be "fun". Unfortunately for Daphne, this should mean that she drops out of the training.
Entropy means everything will expire eventually. She had to tell Harry first but that was the easy one. Her father - now that's going to be "fun". Unfortunately for Daphne, this should mean that she drops out of the training.