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8/7 c1 3This-Mickey-Seems-Iffy
Psychopath with justice? Wtf is this. I he going be a stupid hero?
7/20 c5 gonzoschmonzo1920
I realy like this Story and Hope you Continue it. It would be nice if you could give David a Symbiont and also a lemon scene with Black Cat would be nice too (why did you write german for one line?).
6/1 c3 brodylopa
so far so good hope you contiune it
6/1 c3 Jackejsh
Can't wait for the chapter
6/1 c2 Jackejsh
Please change the name of the dang-ar. It sounds horrible IMO.

The thing about the spider bite giving him innate knowledge on how to build webshooters is way too out there. It would sound less ridiculous if the spider bite simply enhanced his intelligence to the point that it allowed him to create one.

I think him gaining emotions and becoming more 'human' is a great idea. It makes future dialogue much less boring and predictable
6/1 c1 Jackejsh
I like the concept and how you presented it so far. Hopefully, you'll be able to complete this story
5/27 c2 2nataku2709
Nice story

If you somehow you give your MC a symbiote, that would fun to read :p

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