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8/6 c1 1Rhyn3
alright, this has potential, but aside from a few spelling errors, mixed up pronoun, and general lack of punctuation; I noticed something that is either AU for HP or an error on your part:"There is more Black blood in the Potters than the Malfoys". this is incorrect, as Draco's mother is Narcissa Malfoy nee Black meaning Draco is 50% black by blood, while Harry/Aerith is at most 25% by prePottermore grandparents (Dorea Charlus), less by canon grandparents (Fleamont Euphemia). The only way the blood percentages would surpass draco is if Sirius blood adopted Harry/Aerith.
You could do with more physical descriptions and explaining why phoenixes can speak martian, and why she absorbed Godric's memories a few days after acquiring the sword
6/17 c2 ShadowMoon Paxs
Please update it's amazing. I want to know what happens next.
6/8 c2 46Hikari Nova
very nice and interesting idea :D
6/3 c2 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
5/21 c1 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
5/21 c1 kubpaw57
Okay this is a very interesting story. I will be watching your progress with great interest :)
5/20 c1 Jostanos
How may things play out from here?
What may Magical UK's reaction be when they find out that their "savior" is no longer there?

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