for Reincarnation Mistake9/18/2021 c3 
1Pushi19
Update please my suggestion next person they find Luna and usagi sailor moon before they awaken.
1Pushi19Update please my suggestion next person they find Luna and usagi sailor moon before they awaken.
9/7/2021 c3 3WhiteElfElder
Why did they take off when viewing the Unicorns, afraid of a confrontation with the Centaurs? The Dragons I can understand
3WhiteElfElderWhy did they take off when viewing the Unicorns, afraid of a confrontation with the Centaurs? The Dragons I can understand
9/6/2021 c3 45Hikari Nova
nice update and i can see them doing the same trick to reawaken the other's memories instead of piecing together swish cheese memory fragments like they did in canon
45Hikari Novanice update and i can see them doing the same trick to reawaken the other's memories instead of piecing together swish cheese memory fragments like they did in canon
12/26/2020 c2 Cure Yaoi
I need to know what's next, by the way, I'm from Mexico and I love your story too much, even if I read it with a translator
I need to know what's next, by the way, I'm from Mexico and I love your story too much, even if I read it with a translator
8/6/2020 c1 1Rhyn3
alright, this has potential, but aside from a few spelling errors, mixed up pronoun, and general lack of punctuation; I noticed something that is either AU for HP or an error on your part:"There is more Black blood in the Potters than the Malfoys". this is incorrect, as Draco's mother is Narcissa Malfoy nee Black meaning Draco is 50% black by blood, while Harry/Aerith is at most 25% by prePottermore grandparents (Dorea Charlus), less by canon grandparents (Fleamont Euphemia). The only way the blood percentages would surpass draco is if Sirius blood adopted Harry/Aerith.
You could do with more physical descriptions and explaining why phoenixes can speak martian, and why she absorbed Godric's memories a few days after acquiring the sword
1Rhyn3alright, this has potential, but aside from a few spelling errors, mixed up pronoun, and general lack of punctuation; I noticed something that is either AU for HP or an error on your part:"There is more Black blood in the Potters than the Malfoys". this is incorrect, as Draco's mother is Narcissa Malfoy nee Black meaning Draco is 50% black by blood, while Harry/Aerith is at most 25% by prePottermore grandparents (Dorea Charlus), less by canon grandparents (Fleamont Euphemia). The only way the blood percentages would surpass draco is if Sirius blood adopted Harry/Aerith.
You could do with more physical descriptions and explaining why phoenixes can speak martian, and why she absorbed Godric's memories a few days after acquiring the sword
5/21/2020 c1 SelvariA01
Okay this is a very interesting story. I will be watching your progress with great interest :)
Okay this is a very interesting story. I will be watching your progress with great interest :)