for I loved you first8/4/2023 c13 Guest
Never got Gale bashing - Kat was in the wrong, she get with a man and wanted him to think only about her children and not his, while denying him his future kids and also not granting any right to step-fathers parental control ? Let the guy go, he does not deserve that circus.
Never got Gale bashing - Kat was in the wrong, she get with a man and wanted him to think only about her children and not his, while denying him his future kids and also not granting any right to step-fathers parental control ? Let the guy go, he does not deserve that circus.
8/4/2023 c13 Guest
It's quite unpleasant story. Kind of like people getting kittens and pups to some baby birthday, a thing before a friend. And here - a child before a family. Pregnant teens are like virus cells, multiplying before growing, look at Addie, classic life crisis. What exactly is the message of the story?
It's quite unpleasant story. Kind of like people getting kittens and pups to some baby birthday, a thing before a friend. And here - a child before a family. Pregnant teens are like virus cells, multiplying before growing, look at Addie, classic life crisis. What exactly is the message of the story?
2/21/2023 c1 Guest
Hi! I hope everything is alright. When wey are going to read more about your's fanfic. Thanks You. Take care!
Hi! I hope everything is alright. When wey are going to read more about your's fanfic. Thanks You. Take care!
5/15/2022 c13 
1aPancake
I feel there's too much flak focused against Peeta in the story. He's made some mistakes for certain, but he's making up for be too absent and genuinely learning how to not make those kinds of mistakes again. Additionally he's definitely not the only one at "fault" for the split. Sleeping with Madge wasn't a bad thing, he didn't cheat or hold Katniss to unfair standards. Hell he went out of his way to be supportive of her and Gale despite his own feelings, and then as soon as it was relevant was honest about how he was with someone else for a night during their separation. For the grandparents to be like "We raised you better" is such like a true response that I've definitely heard, especially with old school European-immigrant grandparents.
That said, I love how well you've characterized everyone and given them their own personalities and desires. Especially in how they all live such differing lifestyles, but the siblings and partners are supportive and caring.
1aPancakeI feel there's too much flak focused against Peeta in the story. He's made some mistakes for certain, but he's making up for be too absent and genuinely learning how to not make those kinds of mistakes again. Additionally he's definitely not the only one at "fault" for the split. Sleeping with Madge wasn't a bad thing, he didn't cheat or hold Katniss to unfair standards. Hell he went out of his way to be supportive of her and Gale despite his own feelings, and then as soon as it was relevant was honest about how he was with someone else for a night during their separation. For the grandparents to be like "We raised you better" is such like a true response that I've definitely heard, especially with old school European-immigrant grandparents.
That said, I love how well you've characterized everyone and given them their own personalities and desires. Especially in how they all live such differing lifestyles, but the siblings and partners are supportive and caring.
10/24/2021 c12 12supergirl971
Great chapter ! So much have been going on, but I loved it all !
Can’t wait for the next one.
Good job !
12supergirl971Great chapter ! So much have been going on, but I loved it all !
Can’t wait for the next one.
Good job !
10/24/2021 c12 Dancer0109
This was great! I loved Luke and Peeta's argument for the sole purpose of hearing Luke's perspective. Adeline's coming out was so sweet! This was overall a beautiful chapter, great job!
This was great! I loved Luke and Peeta's argument for the sole purpose of hearing Luke's perspective. Adeline's coming out was so sweet! This was overall a beautiful chapter, great job!
10/23/2021 c12 1Kitt N. Sass
That was an action packed chapter. Luke has claws! Hahaha! Kudos to Addy!
1Kitt N. SassThat was an action packed chapter. Luke has claws! Hahaha! Kudos to Addy!
9/26/2021 c11 Browniangel
I don't even know where to start,.this story is amazing. I'm on the edge of my seat. I feel for all the characters in this story every one of them has an emotional story. From Katniss and Peeta children to all the extended friends and family members.
I would write a book on how I feel about every one. I just wouldn't know who to start with. So happy that Gale is out of the picture that a big plus in my book lol .
Please update soon would love to see what going to happen next. So much is happening Katniss and the baby, Peeta trying to make things right with Katniss. Now Aaron knows about Peeta and Madge which I hope doesn't rude things.
Have an amazing day, evening please be safe and take good care of yourself and your love ones.
I don't even know where to start,.this story is amazing. I'm on the edge of my seat. I feel for all the characters in this story every one of them has an emotional story. From Katniss and Peeta children to all the extended friends and family members.
I would write a book on how I feel about every one. I just wouldn't know who to start with. So happy that Gale is out of the picture that a big plus in my book lol .
Please update soon would love to see what going to happen next. So much is happening Katniss and the baby, Peeta trying to make things right with Katniss. Now Aaron knows about Peeta and Madge which I hope doesn't rude things.
Have an amazing day, evening please be safe and take good care of yourself and your love ones.
9/6/2021 c11 Kitt N. Sass
Oh, that was one hell of a cliffhanger! I hope the next chapter comes soon enough! I can't wait to read it!
Oh, that was one hell of a cliffhanger! I hope the next chapter comes soon enough! I can't wait to read it!
9/3/2021 c11 leek812
That was a great chapter. You covered a lot of ground and then the cliff hanger. I hope the baby is ok
That was a great chapter. You covered a lot of ground and then the cliff hanger. I hope the baby is ok
8/30/2021 c11 Guest
Extrañé tus historias! Estoy alegré q estás d vuelta.
Extrañé tus historias! Estoy alegré q estás d vuelta.
8/29/2021 c11 Guest
Absolutely beautiful chapter
Absolutely beautiful chapter
8/29/2021 c11 YaeliEz
Great chapter! I want to believe that the baby will be okay!
Hope you’ll update soon!
Great chapter! I want to believe that the baby will be okay!
Hope you’ll update soon!
8/30/2021 c11 Dancer0109
I don’t know about anyone else but I’m obsessed with every facet of this story. Everlark being my favorite part but I also love their amazingly intricate family dynamics. I love the communication between Katniss and Peeta. The work they’re putting into their relationship gives us hope and perseverance to continue to read. I cannot wait for more!
I don’t know about anyone else but I’m obsessed with every facet of this story. Everlark being my favorite part but I also love their amazingly intricate family dynamics. I love the communication between Katniss and Peeta. The work they’re putting into their relationship gives us hope and perseverance to continue to read. I cannot wait for more!