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8/10 c1 Wistasteria
The only thing that one comment misses is logic. Fan-fiction is mainly self-indulgent, but there needs to be a clear reason of why something had been changed/altered in the first place.

I, myself, can be bent enough to make a rainbow into a twisted fruit-roll-up, but this story’s depictions are meaningless and completely out of place. So yes, I actually agree with much of the comments. Because most of it isn’t significant to the story and doesn’t do anything but alter the characters with little to no cause and consequences.
8/10 c1 RougePoncho
Wow idk why all the people in your comments are such raging homophobes. They can kiss my ass with their tongue out. Keep doing what you’re doing!
4/1 c11 Alejandro Arturo Ferro Figueroa
I'm gonna stop reading right here, surely this is another sexually weird stuff pushing some lgbtq agenda. Just from introducing with pronouns, like wtf, nobody does that. It is cringe, this whole gender thing is fucking weird. I was exited about the premise and then I get this foreshadowing of weirdness coming out, not even in the tags. THANK god I read the comments to verify my suspicion.
3/12 c38 papercut335
Author, I hate you. you're tired of constantly inventing only transgender people. WARN ME IN ADVANCE AT THE BEGINNING OF THE FANFICTION THAT HE IS BL AND THERE WILL BE A LOT OF BL GARBAGE!
2/13 c1 Guest
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1/12 c3 madstack
Is this going to one of those 'everyone is gay' fanfics, or are you just trying to be politically correct? Because, despite all of Hiruzen's questionable decisions, I don't see an old-school fellow like him giving a pair of impressionable kids to a gay couple, no matter how close they were to one of their parents.

The way I see it, Konoha would treat homosexuals the same way Romans did—a.k.a. "it's only gay if you're the one taking it".

None of that matters, though, as I can't bring myself to read a gay-centric work, much like I can't read fics that are mainly in female P.O.V. Good luck, and maybe next time add a warning for something like this?
1/5 c36 Guest
Are you going to genderbend the whole cast eventually? The story is good, has a lot of potential, but you are taking this a little too far. There are other reasons to not feel right in your skin besides gender. And not everyone *has* to be uncomfortable in their skin.
1/6 c20 Novicewriter 9907
I thought there would be obito vs obito.
12/27/2021 c11 The High Avenger
Stop putting real life politics in fan-fiction. It adds nothing and kills immersion.
12/26/2021 c3 1 love m4gic
Why are you gae?
12/24/2021 c1 4arisasonoda84
is this naruhina?
10/25/2021 c1 Guest
That's an interesting choice of a name. I wonder what a dialogue between Obito and Obito would look like.
10/18/2021 c30 machtgut
Hi, ChaosIsOrder

I am grateful that I was able to read your original story last night before the update this morning.

Overall, you did a great job with the rewrite, explaining scenes not included and their conclusion such as the name change for Akane and what had happen to the twin girls. The read of the story is smooth and you had condense a number of your chapters.

However, I miss a few of your earlier chapters that were eliminated. Such as during Naruto's and Akane's pre-Academy years that explained the reason why Akane is smarter and why Naruto has some insecurities of being left behind and/or abandoned. I believed those chapters should have been kept. Also, I liked that they referred to their parents as Dad and Papa instead of using their actual names. Myself as an adult I still call my parents Dad and Mom. To me it feels weird to call them using their first names. This is strictly my opinion.

Thank you for continuing with your story - I find it fascinating!
10/17/2021 c2 A4N0NYM0U52
This rewrite is awesome, nice jov
10/17/2021 c26 1Rein Tenebres
Congratufuckinglations. You've successfully pissed me off with your update spam of this story, and waking me up tonight. Fuck whatever you did to this story. I'm unfollowing it.
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