for Time and Time again4/1 c13 poiuyt
Nice story, but Tanya is just going along with whatever. Why is she acting like a slave with no choice in anything? That scene could've been saved if Visha had threatened the doctor that she'd die if something happened to Tanya
Nice story, but Tanya is just going along with whatever. Why is she acting like a slave with no choice in anything? That scene could've been saved if Visha had threatened the doctor that she'd die if something happened to Tanya
12/31/2024 c7 Guest
Just curious but you have never watched or see mahouka have you? The seven schools are all Japanese schools in Japan. Tanya and visha are in what sounds like Germany so they would be competing in the Japanese school competitions
Just curious but you have never watched or see mahouka have you? The seven schools are all Japanese schools in Japan. Tanya and visha are in what sounds like Germany so they would be competing in the Japanese school competitions
811/18/2024 c4 Anon
Wtf! Tanya is a extremely powerfull mage, one of if not the most powerfull.
Wtf! Tanya is a extremely powerfull mage, one of if not the most powerfull.
7/16/2024 c6 Aaron21hardin
It’s weird that Germany has essentially a copy of the Japanese 9 schools competition when the Japanese system changes events every 10 years based on internal committee, it’s not international, so Germany would have their own events. I get why you did it, but it’s still weird.
It’s weird that Germany has essentially a copy of the Japanese 9 schools competition when the Japanese system changes events every 10 years based on internal committee, it’s not international, so Germany would have their own events. I get why you did it, but it’s still weird.
6/29/2024 c24 moose
this is fucking obnoxious. and not in a good way. its in a bad writing way.
this is fucking obnoxious. and not in a good way. its in a bad writing way.
6/28/2024 c7 moose
man ptsd as a plot device sucks. narratively it can work but its always such a drag.
man ptsd as a plot device sucks. narratively it can work but its always such a drag.
6/28/2024 c1 moose
ehhhh im not really digging it. tanya at least seems decently in character, but visha doesnt really seem at all like visha. and the dialogue is kinda wonky and robotic. ill give it a chance but its not the best first impression
ehhhh im not really digging it. tanya at least seems decently in character, but visha doesnt really seem at all like visha. and the dialogue is kinda wonky and robotic. ill give it a chance but its not the best first impression
1/1/2024 c1 Guest
Wow how conventional that a beautiful lady has psychology regressed towards the age of the mc. Can fanfic authors come up with anything better then shitty romances
Wow how conventional that a beautiful lady has psychology regressed towards the age of the mc. Can fanfic authors come up with anything better then shitty romances
12/17/2023 c10 candrariski155
Actually, why did you make Visha a shy character? Did you read the novel, talking about jealousy, it was Visha who was jealous and not Tanya,Even tends to be a bit yandere, Vhisa even imagined pedophile things about Tanya in the novel and manga, Like he imagined Tanya taking off clothes, jealous of waeis while talking close to Tanya, He even gets angry and wants to beat someone if someone discusses even slightly vulgar things about Tanya. He didn't even show any emotion after beheading a man with a shovel, So how can you make him shy? If you read the novel and manga, you will know that Visha is a pedophile towards Tanya
Actually, why did you make Visha a shy character? Did you read the novel, talking about jealousy, it was Visha who was jealous and not Tanya,Even tends to be a bit yandere, Vhisa even imagined pedophile things about Tanya in the novel and manga, Like he imagined Tanya taking off clothes, jealous of waeis while talking close to Tanya, He even gets angry and wants to beat someone if someone discusses even slightly vulgar things about Tanya. He didn't even show any emotion after beheading a man with a shovel, So how can you make him shy? If you read the novel and manga, you will know that Visha is a pedophile towards Tanya