for Evolving Dragon: DxD(Old version)11/13/2024 c2 Mangaworm256
Ok, I really doubt Rias would’ve beat Sona at chess. She’s at the top of her game with it. It’s how she keeps out of arranged marriages for gods sake.
Ok, I really doubt Rias would’ve beat Sona at chess. She’s at the top of her game with it. It’s how she keeps out of arranged marriages for gods sake.
111/11/2024 c6 uchiha-rune
Fate? I don’t think they can beat the power of the protagonist(EX) skill. Sonic with only a B rank protagonist skill managed to twist fate to where he could never die in. fight, so he can never truly lose. With Ryoto having an EX rank Protagonist skill, he’d win
Fate? I don’t think they can beat the power of the protagonist(EX) skill. Sonic with only a B rank protagonist skill managed to twist fate to where he could never die in. fight, so he can never truly lose. With Ryoto having an EX rank Protagonist skill, he’d win
10/3/2024 c1 SirzechsTard
Post the new story as its own and try to update both. You could have 2 versions of the same story completed with different outcomes.
Post the new story as its own and try to update both. You could have 2 versions of the same story completed with different outcomes.
10/3/2024 c5 h.hadi.j
I see why you decided to rewrite this, the power leveling is all over the place, a dragon with the equivilant power to super devils should evaporate a six winged angel with one punch, also six wings is a highclass the same as rias
I see why you decided to rewrite this, the power leveling is all over the place, a dragon with the equivilant power to super devils should evaporate a six winged angel with one punch, also six wings is a highclass the same as rias
10/3/2024 c8 Velkra7
Please post the new chapters as their own story! It'd be a shame to lose this masterpiece! Looking forward to what you have in store!
Please post the new chapters as their own story! It'd be a shame to lose this masterpiece! Looking forward to what you have in store!
10/3/2024 c8 NecrorexSparda Juubi-No-Kishin
keep this up as a reminder, a backup, and or incase the rewrite doesnt pan out you wont start from zero
keep this up as a reminder, a backup, and or incase the rewrite doesnt pan out you wont start from zero
10/3/2024 c8 alec2212
Separate.
Thought don't call it "rewrite" in the title, change this one to "old version" instead
Separate.
Thought don't call it "rewrite" in the title, change this one to "old version" instead