for Evolving Dragon: DxD(Old version)3/5/2024 c1 dave
you mean your going to wuss out then blame everyone else as the reason you lost cause that's what pro gamers do
you mean your going to wuss out then blame everyone else as the reason you lost cause that's what pro gamers do
3/4/2024 c3 Guest
Like I said I. My kinda long review of last chapter as long as you give these characters some personality and they’re not just one and done this story should be alright.
Like I said I. My kinda long review of last chapter as long as you give these characters some personality and they’re not just one and done this story should be alright.
3/4/2024 c2 Guest
My only problem with the story is if he’s in the same grade as ise he should be around the same height, I get it there are outliers especially in some public schools in the states. But I’m kinda over the over 6ft 16 year old cliché.
About the harem so long as it isn’t a no character development gota catch the all one fuck then done, I’m fine with it. Personally not a fan of overly large harems but most storys that go this way end up in later chapters having about four sentences then smut for like 4.5k words just a little warning.
Good luck I’m still going to give this a shot course it’s an interesting premise.
My only problem with the story is if he’s in the same grade as ise he should be around the same height, I get it there are outliers especially in some public schools in the states. But I’m kinda over the over 6ft 16 year old cliché.
About the harem so long as it isn’t a no character development gota catch the all one fuck then done, I’m fine with it. Personally not a fan of overly large harems but most storys that go this way end up in later chapters having about four sentences then smut for like 4.5k words just a little warning.
Good luck I’m still going to give this a shot course it’s an interesting premise.
3/5/2024 c7 
4Un-Named Monarch
Well, who woulda guessed? The Fates took out Ryo by taking out an entire universe. Not taken by Ragnarok or worse, but with a whimper. Nice story, hope to see the rewrite soon.
4Un-Named MonarchWell, who woulda guessed? The Fates took out Ryo by taking out an entire universe. Not taken by Ragnarok or worse, but with a whimper. Nice story, hope to see the rewrite soon.
3/5/2024 c6 adam110902
i had to reread the story to remember
but i can confirm
its good
the right amount of horny for the universe its in
decent humor
mc that doesn't make me want to throw my phone away
i have seen and read far worse
i had to reread the story to remember
but i can confirm
its good
the right amount of horny for the universe its in
decent humor
mc that doesn't make me want to throw my phone away
i have seen and read far worse
3/4/2024 c7 Velkra7
Thanks for all your hard work and looking forward to the rewrite! Please keep Ryoto OP tho!
Thanks for all your hard work and looking forward to the rewrite! Please keep Ryoto OP tho!
3/4/2024 c7 GhostlyDrew
Cool! Hype for the rewrite!
But pls, do give us a heads up it's live over here.
Cool! Hype for the rewrite!
But pls, do give us a heads up it's live over here.
2/19/2023 c1 ThatOneRandomDude
5 sentences in and I already hate your MC and writing style. better luck next time.
5 sentences in and I already hate your MC and writing style. better luck next time.
2/16/2023 c5 1kasicair
Kay, I've had enough. It is not my cup of tea but...
It is a great crack fic. If you are bored and want to read something casual where nothing is taken seriously, then this is it. Don't expect anything serious or emotionally deep or anything like that. But it is still a good story at what it does, namely, being a non-serious crack fic.
1kasicairKay, I've had enough. It is not my cup of tea but...
It is a great crack fic. If you are bored and want to read something casual where nothing is taken seriously, then this is it. Don't expect anything serious or emotionally deep or anything like that. But it is still a good story at what it does, namely, being a non-serious crack fic.
2/8/2023 c4 Isharioth666
Yeah expected a run of the mill dxd ff with maybe OpMc but well...
I guess the crackficcommment from others is accurate.
Totally moronic MC with bad humor and erratic questionable behavior...
Sadly its not a funny crackfic and there are a lot of Jojoreferences sadlywhich kinda makes this story like a crossover between dxd and bocu no pico in my eyesjust leaving the comment here to warn others with a similar dislike for this.
others are free to try it out
Yeah expected a run of the mill dxd ff with maybe OpMc but well...
I guess the crackficcommment from others is accurate.
Totally moronic MC with bad humor and erratic questionable behavior...
Sadly its not a funny crackfic and there are a lot of Jojoreferences sadlywhich kinda makes this story like a crossover between dxd and bocu no pico in my eyesjust leaving the comment here to warn others with a similar dislike for this.
others are free to try it out