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15Abyssdancer
The whole 'Izuku's Quirk causes whoever he bonds with him practically causes them to stop aging' kind of sounds like when someone bonds with the Energems in Power Rangers Dino Charge.
15AbyssdancerThe whole 'Izuku's Quirk causes whoever he bonds with him practically causes them to stop aging' kind of sounds like when someone bonds with the Energems in Power Rangers Dino Charge.
4/10 c1 11Kamiro G.S
I see that my last review bungled my own grammer.
in the direct feedback, what was mean to be there were 'quotation marks' and "speech marks".
11Kamiro G.SI see that my last review bungled my own grammer.
in the direct feedback, what was mean to be there were 'quotation marks' and "speech marks".
4/10 c1 Kamiro G.S
I'd recommend coming back and touching up this first chapter. It's the first impression your new readers have for the storey, and it's riddled with grammatical mistakes then that's a less than stellar impression.
For more direct feedback; only useto emphasise the characters' names the first time. Any time after that is simply tedious and redundant. Also useinsteadof, as this willin confuse readers on who is saying what.
Since you've been making this story for something like 80 chapters now (can't see exactly while writing this review), I'm sure you writing skills have drastically improved. Let your first chapter reflect that!
I'd recommend coming back and touching up this first chapter. It's the first impression your new readers have for the storey, and it's riddled with grammatical mistakes then that's a less than stellar impression.
For more direct feedback; only useto emphasise the characters' names the first time. Any time after that is simply tedious and redundant. Also useinsteadof, as this willin confuse readers on who is saying what.
Since you've been making this story for something like 80 chapters now (can't see exactly while writing this review), I'm sure you writing skills have drastically improved. Let your first chapter reflect that!
4/7 c89 AnimeFan13579
Well the villain attack starts up can only wonder how that's going to play out. With Izuku they can immediately notify heroes on the mainland of the attack and even call in the walking nuke. Though considering they're in training for running an agency and villains are part of that. You could probably consider the thought that one of them or even All Might would ask to hold off summoning or if did just sit back. The class can call in a lot of power that would make most villains no threat so it's more like another test for them. All Might is basically the backup if things are way out of their league to handle. Among the canon villain group only Nine himself would be the real threat where such an action is considered.
Seeing that A/N at the end I'm just imagining a "yet" right after saying you don't own the pin.
Well the villain attack starts up can only wonder how that's going to play out. With Izuku they can immediately notify heroes on the mainland of the attack and even call in the walking nuke. Though considering they're in training for running an agency and villains are part of that. You could probably consider the thought that one of them or even All Might would ask to hold off summoning or if did just sit back. The class can call in a lot of power that would make most villains no threat so it's more like another test for them. All Might is basically the backup if things are way out of their league to handle. Among the canon villain group only Nine himself would be the real threat where such an action is considered.
Seeing that A/N at the end I'm just imagining a "yet" right after saying you don't own the pin.
4/6 c1 Einar1
I did not see it coming having all might bond with izuku. and I know sorta hope that izuku dose get a Harem even if it's a small one.
I did not see it coming having all might bond with izuku. and I know sorta hope that izuku dose get a Harem even if it's a small one.
3/26 c16 IzuHaremPrince
Oh shit that make sense now, why this katsuki is semi-nice while still semi-canon! It also answered my question a few chapters ago, also will the be any kind of love for the green bean?!
Oh shit that make sense now, why this katsuki is semi-nice while still semi-canon! It also answered my question a few chapters ago, also will the be any kind of love for the green bean?!
3/26 c2 IzuHaremPrince
Wait if the girls like izuku and want to be intimate with him would that then be considered bestiality or furry...Joking but not really?!
Wait if the girls like izuku and want to be intimate with him would that then be considered bestiality or furry...Joking but not really?!
3/26 c1 IzuHaremPrince
If this isn't a harem by the end, I'll post something "nice" somewhere about the grape and Baka-hoe!
P.s is Baka-hoe a natural born female in here?!
If this isn't a harem by the end, I'll post something "nice" somewhere about the grape and Baka-hoe!
P.s is Baka-hoe a natural born female in here?!
3/25 c88 AnimeFan13579
Sad thing of this arc is the very fact Izuku can call in All Might at any time ruins having Nine appear there. He is literally the type of villain who'd be seen as needing an All Might level response. The others not exactly so much in comparison. Of course him having the power to call in All Might would likely be a known issue to villains. After all you had the issue of him summoning in members of the group publicly before. Which would likely mean that he'd be recognized as an immediate threat by any villains that discover he's in the area. If he's not taken out of the equation not only would his allies have a power boost available but he can also summon a "nuke".
Sad thing of this arc is the very fact Izuku can call in All Might at any time ruins having Nine appear there. He is literally the type of villain who'd be seen as needing an All Might level response. The others not exactly so much in comparison. Of course him having the power to call in All Might would likely be a known issue to villains. After all you had the issue of him summoning in members of the group publicly before. Which would likely mean that he'd be recognized as an immediate threat by any villains that discover he's in the area. If he's not taken out of the equation not only would his allies have a power boost available but he can also summon a "nuke".
3/23 c88 Supergameben
Well it should be interesting to see hiw this goes.
Anyway one thing that always bugged me about this movie: They don’t catch Nine and it’s not like they would know Shigaraki killed him, so for all they know he’s still around, yet they can’t bring him up since he’s a movie character.
Well it should be interesting to see hiw this goes.
Anyway one thing that always bugged me about this movie: They don’t catch Nine and it’s not like they would know Shigaraki killed him, so for all they know he’s still around, yet they can’t bring him up since he’s a movie character.