for The Villain Wrangler Vol 211/27 c7 sid99
holy shit, i honestly believed i would never see you update again...im happy to see you still around and this update was beautiful :D will you keep updating this one and the other wrangler story as well?
holy shit, i honestly believed i would never see you update again...im happy to see you still around and this update was beautiful :D will you keep updating this one and the other wrangler story as well?
11/15 c7 Guest
Yeah, a Loki chapter! BTW, did you really visit all 50 states!? Wow, lot of respect to you! Keep write more stories but be sure to take breaks, okay!
Yeah, a Loki chapter! BTW, did you really visit all 50 states!? Wow, lot of respect to you! Keep write more stories but be sure to take breaks, okay!
11/12 c7 Guest
Here is a suggestion for a villain, as well as the kid requesting them (or at least thier background). A kid that used to be able go outdoors and go hunting/fishing with dad or grandpa requesting a visit from Kraven The Hunter
Here is a suggestion for a villain, as well as the kid requesting them (or at least thier background). A kid that used to be able go outdoors and go hunting/fishing with dad or grandpa requesting a visit from Kraven The Hunter
11/11 c1 Guest
Not bad, ngl was dissapointed you made a new OC and not the same OC from D.C
But It's only the first chapter, it'll grow on mr sooner or later.
Although it did feel too "forced" and almost like the she-hulk show where the MC barely had any struggles or build up.
She had it way yo easy snd fast to get the TOP villian already.
Kind of felt un-athentic tbh
Not bad, ngl was dissapointed you made a new OC and not the same OC from D.C
But It's only the first chapter, it'll grow on mr sooner or later.
Although it did feel too "forced" and almost like the she-hulk show where the MC barely had any struggles or build up.
She had it way yo easy snd fast to get the TOP villian already.
Kind of felt un-athentic tbh
11/13 c7 
1GideonBlackthorn
jesus man dont scare us like that! glad to hear everything is copacetic with you and new ch was excellent.
1GideonBlackthornjesus man dont scare us like that! glad to hear everything is copacetic with you and new ch was excellent.
11/12 c7 StandupSitdown
Welcome back and glad to hear you're doing well!
Another good chapter. I liked the idea of her just trying Heimdall on a lark and am interested in seeing more of your portrayal of Loki.
As for character suggestions you could maybe do Fred Dukes (the Blob) he could be for a kid with some kind of serious glandular problem or something? I admit I'm not well versed in all kinds of medical ailments that fall under make a wish standards.
Another mutant might be Pyro. He's personally one of my favorites in the movie verse and I was so happy to hear he'd be in the new Deadpool. You could do some kind of characterization of him from the movies with a kid that got hurt by their powers which let's them control but not create something? (The X-2 God Among Insects scene with him and Magneto on the X-Jet is one of my favorites) you could always have him reunite with Bobby/ Iceman as a joint wish from a kid.
For non mutants you could do chapters for Rhino and/or Shocker. Both have times where they're not horrible and Rhino in particular had a great storyline in Spiderman The Gauntlet, leading up to Grim Hunt, where he'd put the suit and crime behind him and had settled down with an honest woman. It ended tragically, but like with Nora Freeze in your other story you could do what you want there.
As for villains that have been portrayed as grey in some storylines you might include like how you did Doom there's always Doc Octopus with his scientific acumen. Kaine Parker had a really fantastic run as the Scarlet Spider and I'd argue he's more of a hero now in the comics like Bucky compared to earlier portrayals. You could use Kaine or Madelyn Prior, Spiderman and Jean Grey clones, in a wish from a kid dying from some kind of clone degredation/ cellular issue after being experimented on by Mr Sinister or another truly evil baddie. You could apply that to X-23 too.
You've got the Tinkerer who is a Fantastic Four villain that helped them out of the negative zone in Secret Invasion despite being arrested during Civil War while out with his grandkids.
And Owen O'Grady who is my favorite Ant-Man simply because of when I first really got back into comics as a teenager since Pym wasn't Ant-Man and Scott was dead at the time. He's solidly bad now and I think might even technically be dead and taken over by a robot but he was a reluctant antihero type starting out.
I have to stop now because I'm just going to keep coming up with.. ooooh Cain Marko the Juggernaut! Xavier having to get in touch with his half brother and them arguing only for the Make a Wish Kids sob story getting to Marko could be both touching and humorous.
Seriously now, going to stop haha.
Welcome back and glad to hear you're doing well!
Another good chapter. I liked the idea of her just trying Heimdall on a lark and am interested in seeing more of your portrayal of Loki.
As for character suggestions you could maybe do Fred Dukes (the Blob) he could be for a kid with some kind of serious glandular problem or something? I admit I'm not well versed in all kinds of medical ailments that fall under make a wish standards.
Another mutant might be Pyro. He's personally one of my favorites in the movie verse and I was so happy to hear he'd be in the new Deadpool. You could do some kind of characterization of him from the movies with a kid that got hurt by their powers which let's them control but not create something? (The X-2 God Among Insects scene with him and Magneto on the X-Jet is one of my favorites) you could always have him reunite with Bobby/ Iceman as a joint wish from a kid.
For non mutants you could do chapters for Rhino and/or Shocker. Both have times where they're not horrible and Rhino in particular had a great storyline in Spiderman The Gauntlet, leading up to Grim Hunt, where he'd put the suit and crime behind him and had settled down with an honest woman. It ended tragically, but like with Nora Freeze in your other story you could do what you want there.
As for villains that have been portrayed as grey in some storylines you might include like how you did Doom there's always Doc Octopus with his scientific acumen. Kaine Parker had a really fantastic run as the Scarlet Spider and I'd argue he's more of a hero now in the comics like Bucky compared to earlier portrayals. You could use Kaine or Madelyn Prior, Spiderman and Jean Grey clones, in a wish from a kid dying from some kind of clone degredation/ cellular issue after being experimented on by Mr Sinister or another truly evil baddie. You could apply that to X-23 too.
You've got the Tinkerer who is a Fantastic Four villain that helped them out of the negative zone in Secret Invasion despite being arrested during Civil War while out with his grandkids.
And Owen O'Grady who is my favorite Ant-Man simply because of when I first really got back into comics as a teenager since Pym wasn't Ant-Man and Scott was dead at the time. He's solidly bad now and I think might even technically be dead and taken over by a robot but he was a reluctant antihero type starting out.
I have to stop now because I'm just going to keep coming up with.. ooooh Cain Marko the Juggernaut! Xavier having to get in touch with his half brother and them arguing only for the Make a Wish Kids sob story getting to Marko could be both touching and humorous.
Seriously now, going to stop haha.