for What the Future Holds6/14 c1 Halofanreach
When you update after return of the jedi can you show the fate of the clones you know them getting tortured experimented on executed destruction of kamino discarded
When you update after return of the jedi can you show the fate of the clones you know them getting tortured experimented on executed destruction of kamino discarded
6/11 c49 Joshua Rubin
Please make more chapters I love this story
Please make more chapters I love this story
6/10 c49 revoltyami
I'm really hoping to read another chapter of this. It's been a long time since I've been here. With everything that's been happening. It's nice to escape from the drama.
I'm really hoping to read another chapter of this. It's been a long time since I've been here. With everything that's been happening. It's nice to escape from the drama.
6/9 c8 Allison
Hey dude when you get to the final showdown with Palpatine, could you use the Radio Drama version where Vader yells "MY SON!" instead of "NO!"?
Hey dude when you get to the final showdown with Palpatine, could you use the Radio Drama version where Vader yells "MY SON!" instead of "NO!"?
6/7 c38 Anonymous
If you do update it,can you show thing about what happened to Jedi like cal and kanan and Ezra,the world between worlds and possibly can you show what happened to Ilum and the death stars were powered by kyber crystals
If you do update it,can you show thing about what happened to Jedi like cal and kanan and Ezra,the world between worlds and possibly can you show what happened to Ilum and the death stars were powered by kyber crystals
6/6 c49 pdena23
An incredible, incredible story. I beg you to update it! The jedi council's reaction when Vader redeems himself, sacrificing himself for his son, and Luke tapping into the dark side in the final duel, before rejecting it, and Sidious recognizing Luke as a Jedi... it's just amazing to think about. Thank you for the story!
An incredible, incredible story. I beg you to update it! The jedi council's reaction when Vader redeems himself, sacrificing himself for his son, and Luke tapping into the dark side in the final duel, before rejecting it, and Sidious recognizing Luke as a Jedi... it's just amazing to think about. Thank you for the story!
5/31 c49 Hannah Ebertowski
Please post the next few chapters. I'm dying without finding out what they think of what goes on next. I've been reading this story since you posted the first time ever. I cannot wait to see the end. Keep up the good work.
Please post the next few chapters. I'm dying without finding out what they think of what goes on next. I've been reading this story since you posted the first time ever. I cannot wait to see the end. Keep up the good work.
5/28 c49 
21scribe0magic
Is the Asoka series going to be shown? I think them seeing the type of person she becomes and the final lesson Anakin gives her would give the council something to think about. As well as Ezra's journey, not all of it, but enough to show them his growth
21scribe0magicIs the Asoka series going to be shown? I think them seeing the type of person she becomes and the final lesson Anakin gives her would give the council something to think about. As well as Ezra's journey, not all of it, but enough to show them his growth
5/21 c48 23G4dgetJunior
please continue, this is the best characters watching the franchise fic ive ever seen!
23G4dgetJuniorplease continue, this is the best characters watching the franchise fic ive ever seen!
5/17 c49 dillon1996
i have been reading for a few years now and i am loving that you are back looking foward to more thank you for writing.
i have been reading for a few years now and i am loving that you are back looking foward to more thank you for writing.
5/13 c49 Multifan
I've been reading this for some time now. I read your comment about quitting and then coming back to give you an idea. I'm glad you're back doing this
You made a mistake in this chapter. After the big reveal about Leia, Plo Koon mentioned Sabine Wren and Kanan Jarrus/Caleb Dume. They haven't met Sabine Wren or the other members of the Lothal resistance besides Ezra Bridger. As for Caleb/Kanan, they know he escaped the Bad Batch. they know he initially survived Order 66. But that's it. They know about the masked Jedi on Malachor with Ezra, but they haven't made the connection between the two.
Now that the truth about Leia is known, you can start the next chapter with that third disk blinking. When they play it, they'll settle the glitch is gone and watch the final conference between Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Bail Organa. They'll see Obi-Wan's initial plans for the babies, and Yoda's refusal to do that. Bail's offer to adopt Leia. The training Yoda has in store for Obi-Wan : "How to commune with him, I will teach you. How to become one with the Force, he will teach you.". And C-3PO's memory wipe. And I can see Anakin's and Padme's reaction: "He must have some in-built flaw. Probably from the parts I used to build him. For all his insistence on protocol, he never understood the need for secrecy or discretion. Hate to say it, but Bail wiping Threepio's memory was for the best."
I've been reading this for some time now. I read your comment about quitting and then coming back to give you an idea. I'm glad you're back doing this
You made a mistake in this chapter. After the big reveal about Leia, Plo Koon mentioned Sabine Wren and Kanan Jarrus/Caleb Dume. They haven't met Sabine Wren or the other members of the Lothal resistance besides Ezra Bridger. As for Caleb/Kanan, they know he escaped the Bad Batch. they know he initially survived Order 66. But that's it. They know about the masked Jedi on Malachor with Ezra, but they haven't made the connection between the two.
Now that the truth about Leia is known, you can start the next chapter with that third disk blinking. When they play it, they'll settle the glitch is gone and watch the final conference between Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Bail Organa. They'll see Obi-Wan's initial plans for the babies, and Yoda's refusal to do that. Bail's offer to adopt Leia. The training Yoda has in store for Obi-Wan : "How to commune with him, I will teach you. How to become one with the Force, he will teach you.". And C-3PO's memory wipe. And I can see Anakin's and Padme's reaction: "He must have some in-built flaw. Probably from the parts I used to build him. For all his insistence on protocol, he never understood the need for secrecy or discretion. Hate to say it, but Bail wiping Threepio's memory was for the best."