for What the Future Holds12/16/2020 c27 
26creativo
Padmé should reveal herself? yes ten times over and for the projection I would put the three pillars of Vader
1) The very high price of "Dreams Will Pass in Time" teaching them that family is more important than a code for robots
2) The whole Rako Hardeen stunt and the fiasco that came because of it
3) How the jedi council signed their death warrant with the expulsion of Ashoka
After that if you still have time any scene of the Episode III that cross your mind after all Operation Knightfall was not murder it was euthanacy
26creativoPadmé should reveal herself? yes ten times over and for the projection I would put the three pillars of Vader
1) The very high price of "Dreams Will Pass in Time" teaching them that family is more important than a code for robots
2) The whole Rako Hardeen stunt and the fiasco that came because of it
3) How the jedi council signed their death warrant with the expulsion of Ashoka
After that if you still have time any scene of the Episode III that cross your mind after all Operation Knightfall was not murder it was euthanacy
12/15/2020 c27 86KristinalUzumakiPrime23
you should have padme Amidala reveal herself as Skywalker's wife, and you should show scenes from revenge of the sith and the final season of the clone wars together.
86KristinalUzumakiPrime23you should have padme Amidala reveal herself as Skywalker's wife, and you should show scenes from revenge of the sith and the final season of the clone wars together.
12/15/2020 c27 66heavyneos
I think Padme should reveal she is the wife but Windu might not care and try to kill him anyway remember as a side effect of Vappad they channel the Darkside to reflect it back with no one to reflect it back to windu may be overwhelmed
66heavyneosI think Padme should reveal she is the wife but Windu might not care and try to kill him anyway remember as a side effect of Vappad they channel the Darkside to reflect it back with no one to reflect it back to windu may be overwhelmed
12/14/2020 c27 24Yolowritter
Hey Spectre, I have some advise here. I think that Windu would definately try to detain of harm Anakin, but I don't think that Obi Wan and Yoda would let Windu kill him. While Padme will have to reveal herself at some point, it wouldn't be necessary in order to drive the plot forward and we could get this scene where everyone is extremely surprised that Anakin is redeemed and where they forgive him and whatnot. As for my suggestion about the interlude, I would recomend the Siege of Mandalore arc from TCW. Lastly, I haven't been able to find the exact link, but I know that if you search "Revenge of the Sith novelization" on Wookiepedia the site will provide a good description of the fights as well as insight into what the characters are thinking (and yes, I have it open in a second tab as I'm writting this). I hope I helped you and eadgerly await the next chapter of your amazing story.
-Yolowritter
24YolowritterHey Spectre, I have some advise here. I think that Windu would definately try to detain of harm Anakin, but I don't think that Obi Wan and Yoda would let Windu kill him. While Padme will have to reveal herself at some point, it wouldn't be necessary in order to drive the plot forward and we could get this scene where everyone is extremely surprised that Anakin is redeemed and where they forgive him and whatnot. As for my suggestion about the interlude, I would recomend the Siege of Mandalore arc from TCW. Lastly, I haven't been able to find the exact link, but I know that if you search "Revenge of the Sith novelization" on Wookiepedia the site will provide a good description of the fights as well as insight into what the characters are thinking (and yes, I have it open in a second tab as I'm writting this). I hope I helped you and eadgerly await the next chapter of your amazing story.
-Yolowritter
12/14/2020 c27 2Zevren
Hey, this is my first ever Review/comment on !
First off wanted to say love what you’ve done so far, have like it quite a bit.
Now onto the suggestion. I would say yes have Padme reveal her identity to save Anakin, even though shaken I think she would do such a thing if Anakin was about to be killed. Of course probably have Yoda stop Mace, as what he is doing is pretty borderline sith like.
I would then say first interlude should consist of that scene followed by why Anakin turned. So you can skip all of Revenge of the Sith (less writing), I would suggest showing only key scene.
These would be; Anakin waking up with nightmares of Padme’s death, Palpatine telling Anakin he’s a Sith, followed by him telling Winduw and all that ensues there. I think the commentary on Mace not taking him into custody, Palpatine begging for help from Anakin, and especially his instant regret after cutting off Mace’s hand would be spectacular.
Second interlude (depending on how many words you do per interlude) I suggest would follow after the last, but skipping a few things, mainly going to Mustafar right away (Skipping the temple destruction and order 66) and showing why Anakin begins to hate Obi-Wan. Probably the whole scene where he talks and then chokes padme (But not necessary) mainly supposed to show their epic fight on Mustafar. Commentary on Obi-Wan and him fighting would be good, especially when he just leaves Anakin there to burn. (Honestly the reactions to that I think should vary but some outrage from a few would be nice, I mean he just leaves him there burning!)
Of course the second interlude would then have to finish with Anakin waking up in the Vader suit and immediately asking about Padme and his reaction. Sort of reaffirming to all watchers exactly why he did what he did. (Also possible comment about the fact he didn’t know his children were alive, up to you.)
Finally the third interlude (last), To keep with your last set of interludes should probably be the final duel between Vader and Ashoka, you finished it at the part where his mask gets broken so probably go on from there. Up to you to decided where you finish that one. You can finish it where they think she dies, but then show that she actually doesn’t later in the series, or you could leave Anakin thinking he killed Ashoka before going into Return of the Jedi.
I’m guessing here that you’ll reveal that Ashoka is alive and a few other little things after return of the Jedi (like a finale set of scenes for them to watch), which is why I think you could leave Anakin thinking he killed Ashoka in this set of interludes. It’s also because of this that I don’t think you should show some of the clones wars stuff such as Ashoka and rex during order 66 and the end of the series. (Though I bloody love the end scene of the show and would love to see their comments about it. You know Anakin thinking she’s dead and picking up her lightsaber etc. Ect.)
Other than them, I guess for a meta perspective for them to watch, there are quite a few good videos on why Jedi are evil and Anakin had all the right to turn on youtube that you could make them watch. I remember there being a good film theory video about this, but my memory isn’t the best. That would be just for fun though.
Keep up the good work and good luck!
2ZevrenHey, this is my first ever Review/comment on !
First off wanted to say love what you’ve done so far, have like it quite a bit.
Now onto the suggestion. I would say yes have Padme reveal her identity to save Anakin, even though shaken I think she would do such a thing if Anakin was about to be killed. Of course probably have Yoda stop Mace, as what he is doing is pretty borderline sith like.
I would then say first interlude should consist of that scene followed by why Anakin turned. So you can skip all of Revenge of the Sith (less writing), I would suggest showing only key scene.
These would be; Anakin waking up with nightmares of Padme’s death, Palpatine telling Anakin he’s a Sith, followed by him telling Winduw and all that ensues there. I think the commentary on Mace not taking him into custody, Palpatine begging for help from Anakin, and especially his instant regret after cutting off Mace’s hand would be spectacular.
Second interlude (depending on how many words you do per interlude) I suggest would follow after the last, but skipping a few things, mainly going to Mustafar right away (Skipping the temple destruction and order 66) and showing why Anakin begins to hate Obi-Wan. Probably the whole scene where he talks and then chokes padme (But not necessary) mainly supposed to show their epic fight on Mustafar. Commentary on Obi-Wan and him fighting would be good, especially when he just leaves Anakin there to burn. (Honestly the reactions to that I think should vary but some outrage from a few would be nice, I mean he just leaves him there burning!)
Of course the second interlude would then have to finish with Anakin waking up in the Vader suit and immediately asking about Padme and his reaction. Sort of reaffirming to all watchers exactly why he did what he did. (Also possible comment about the fact he didn’t know his children were alive, up to you.)
Finally the third interlude (last), To keep with your last set of interludes should probably be the final duel between Vader and Ashoka, you finished it at the part where his mask gets broken so probably go on from there. Up to you to decided where you finish that one. You can finish it where they think she dies, but then show that she actually doesn’t later in the series, or you could leave Anakin thinking he killed Ashoka before going into Return of the Jedi.
I’m guessing here that you’ll reveal that Ashoka is alive and a few other little things after return of the Jedi (like a finale set of scenes for them to watch), which is why I think you could leave Anakin thinking he killed Ashoka in this set of interludes. It’s also because of this that I don’t think you should show some of the clones wars stuff such as Ashoka and rex during order 66 and the end of the series. (Though I bloody love the end scene of the show and would love to see their comments about it. You know Anakin thinking she’s dead and picking up her lightsaber etc. Ect.)
Other than them, I guess for a meta perspective for them to watch, there are quite a few good videos on why Jedi are evil and Anakin had all the right to turn on youtube that you could make them watch. I remember there being a good film theory video about this, but my memory isn’t the best. That would be just for fun though.
Keep up the good work and good luck!
12/14/2020 c27 3BlazerRaylock
Well, Since Rex is present...
An episode detailing the control chip of the clones, to prevent many of their numbers from suddenly turning. The hypnotic state Rex was is proof already.
And of course Order 66, since the whole reveal of Anakin has come to light.
3BlazerRaylockWell, Since Rex is present...
An episode detailing the control chip of the clones, to prevent many of their numbers from suddenly turning. The hypnotic state Rex was is proof already.
And of course Order 66, since the whole reveal of Anakin has come to light.
12/14/2020 c27 James351
If you choose to do the entire Vader vs ashoka could you use this one which a fan edit but better
watch?vEcdXnUiK2KY
If you choose to do the entire Vader vs ashoka could you use this one which a fan edit but better
watch?vEcdXnUiK2KY
12/14/2020 c27 Guest
I recomnd Padme reveal herself as Ankain's wife, maybe doing the seventh season of Clone Wars, and maybe a video from Lore Master exploring why the Jedi failed, why the Seperatists were not evil.
I recomnd Padme reveal herself as Ankain's wife, maybe doing the seventh season of Clone Wars, and maybe a video from Lore Master exploring why the Jedi failed, why the Seperatists were not evil.
12/14/2020 c27 Unknown reader
You could have yoda talk about how the future isn't set in stone yet and that they should watch the rest of series before accusing anakin of any wrong doings that he would do in the future.
But on your suggestion on whether or not padme should reveal herself I think you should do it
You could have yoda talk about how the future isn't set in stone yet and that they should watch the rest of series before accusing anakin of any wrong doings that he would do in the future.
But on your suggestion on whether or not padme should reveal herself I think you should do it
12/13/2020 c27 Guest
I guess you should show return of the jedi
and show how he is the chosen one
I guess you should show return of the jedi
and show how he is the chosen one
12/14/2020 c27 lm Bionic
If I were you, I would say yes have padme reveal herself and also show the end of the confrontation with Vader on malachor. Also maybe have the narrator talk some sense into Windu, saying something along the lines of Anakin hasn’t fallen yet, if you keep making an enemy of him then he’s going to fall, yada yada yada.
If I were you, I would say yes have padme reveal herself and also show the end of the confrontation with Vader on malachor. Also maybe have the narrator talk some sense into Windu, saying something along the lines of Anakin hasn’t fallen yet, if you keep making an enemy of him then he’s going to fall, yada yada yada.