for What the Future Holds4/19 c6 TheOrbIsStealingMyGritz
…. Did you think you cooked with “classic obi-wan kenobi!”
Did you think that was a good line?
…. Did you think you cooked with “classic obi-wan kenobi!”
Did you think that was a good line?
4/12 c48 
7JediKnight501st
That line "Did Boba Fett just die? You know, Padawan... it's really unclear." Great! Made me laugh. Was it inspired by Avatar the Last Airbender? Either way, great job with this story, and I'm really sorry about your dad.
7JediKnight501stThat line "Did Boba Fett just die? You know, Padawan... it's really unclear." Great! Made me laugh. Was it inspired by Avatar the Last Airbender? Either way, great job with this story, and I'm really sorry about your dad.
4/10 c49 GORPHY Reader
Yusss, it lives. I'm pretty sure that ive seen several adapted lines based on the original trilogy book. I liked that book.
I also like that you incorporate the clones wars as well. If possible it would be great to showcase luke against the dark troopers.
Yusss, it lives. I'm pretty sure that ive seen several adapted lines based on the original trilogy book. I liked that book.
I also like that you incorporate the clones wars as well. If possible it would be great to showcase luke against the dark troopers.
4/6 c49 Guest
i have a theory that the reason the force is so off balanced is because anakin is the missing piece of it as in anakin is the force but a tiny piece of it broke off because of sidious and took human form as a emergency survival and gave qui gon the power to sense it and bring it together and thats why anakin has more control over the force then any other jedi or force user
i have a theory that the reason the force is so off balanced is because anakin is the missing piece of it as in anakin is the force but a tiny piece of it broke off because of sidious and took human form as a emergency survival and gave qui gon the power to sense it and bring it together and thats why anakin has more control over the force then any other jedi or force user
4/5 c49 Guest
Okay, so far, so good! I'm ready for the next part of the story!
Okay, so far, so good! I'm ready for the next part of the story!
3/30 c49 SomeReader
Pleasant as always! I am honestly eager to find out how they will react to the climax! That we approach. I like this story, very nice.
Pleasant as always! I am honestly eager to find out how they will react to the climax! That we approach. I like this story, very nice.
3/30 c49 6AllHailThe99th
This is your best chapter thus far. It's much more detailed than your previous few ever since you started Return of the Jedi.
I hope when you finish Return of the Jedi, you write their reactions to force ghost Anakin trying to earn Leia's forgiveness and slowly but surely bonding with her, and Luke visiting Padme's grave (there was an AI video of Luke visiting her grave, and it was so well done). Also, maybe include the Jedi being horrified by the fact that Luke had to team up with Darth Krayt to defeat Abeloth.
6AllHailThe99thThis is your best chapter thus far. It's much more detailed than your previous few ever since you started Return of the Jedi.
I hope when you finish Return of the Jedi, you write their reactions to force ghost Anakin trying to earn Leia's forgiveness and slowly but surely bonding with her, and Luke visiting Padme's grave (there was an AI video of Luke visiting her grave, and it was so well done). Also, maybe include the Jedi being horrified by the fact that Luke had to team up with Darth Krayt to defeat Abeloth.