
7/10/2020 c5 dmvan
I'm glad McGee decided to investigate the warehouse!
That was a BIG mistake for the bad guy to use a smart phone. Big give away, even with the explanation about Phil.
Oh, no, he threatened the team. :(
Nick and Sloane beating up the real Gibbs. So not good.
Max should have gone after the SecNav's nephew. How can you blame the two who investigated when all the evidence and witnesses pointed at him?
Poor Gibbs hearing what Henry was going to do to Bishop.
Oh, great. The Gibbs' clone is on the loose and only you know how much damage he will yet cause.
I'm glad McGee decided to investigate the warehouse!
That was a BIG mistake for the bad guy to use a smart phone. Big give away, even with the explanation about Phil.
Oh, no, he threatened the team. :(
Nick and Sloane beating up the real Gibbs. So not good.
Max should have gone after the SecNav's nephew. How can you blame the two who investigated when all the evidence and witnesses pointed at him?
Poor Gibbs hearing what Henry was going to do to Bishop.
Oh, great. The Gibbs' clone is on the loose and only you know how much damage he will yet cause.
6/30/2020 c4 dmvan
Gibbs locking his basement door. That IS strange.
And he asks McGee to do the retina scan. Hmmmmmmm.
A Smartphone and cussing. Something is definitely not right with Gibbs.
"What do you want, Jack?"
"You . . . " :) :) :)
And smoking too.
Awww, Gibbs brought his own reading glasses so he didn't need Sloane's.
McGee knows Gibbs is innocent. Hmmmmm, that is a twist.
George Freeman's warehouse. Great.
I don't care what they think Gibbs did, I still don't like Nick beating up Gibbs.
A GIBBS CLONE. Now THAT is a twist!
And you better not kill the REAL Gibbs!
Very twisty turny. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Gibbs locking his basement door. That IS strange.
And he asks McGee to do the retina scan. Hmmmmmmm.
A Smartphone and cussing. Something is definitely not right with Gibbs.
"What do you want, Jack?"
"You . . . " :) :) :)
And smoking too.
Awww, Gibbs brought his own reading glasses so he didn't need Sloane's.
McGee knows Gibbs is innocent. Hmmmmm, that is a twist.
George Freeman's warehouse. Great.
I don't care what they think Gibbs did, I still don't like Nick beating up Gibbs.
A GIBBS CLONE. Now THAT is a twist!
And you better not kill the REAL Gibbs!
Very twisty turny. Looking forward to the next chapter!
6/16/2020 c3 dmvan
I'm sure the reason behind all this will become clear, but I'm not liking what Sloane and Torres are doing to Gibbs.
I agree with Jimmy. If Gibbs did something wrong, they shouldn't be vigilantes and kidnap and beat him. They should do it the legal way.
They know Gibbs, and he would never do that to Bishop or shoot McGee.
What did this mysterious person do to Gibbs? Hypnotize him?
I'm sure the reason behind all this will become clear, but I'm not liking what Sloane and Torres are doing to Gibbs.
I agree with Jimmy. If Gibbs did something wrong, they shouldn't be vigilantes and kidnap and beat him. They should do it the legal way.
They know Gibbs, and he would never do that to Bishop or shoot McGee.
What did this mysterious person do to Gibbs? Hypnotize him?
6/12/2020 c2 Slibbs
I think it's good as you wrote it. I just love it with Gibbs and Sloane, but I don't understand why Torres and Sloane Gibbs kidnapped. I am sure that will be clarified later in your storyI am excited to see how to go on️
I think it's good as you wrote it. I just love it with Gibbs and Sloane, but I don't understand why Torres and Sloane Gibbs kidnapped. I am sure that will be clarified later in your storyI am excited to see how to go on️
6/10/2020 c2 Guest
Me dejaste con la curiosidad! Sigue asi
Me dejaste con la curiosidad! Sigue asi
6/9/2020 c2 Guest
Gibbs acting like a f***** woman throwing s tantrum lol. This made me laugh. Can you really picture Gibbs doing that? NO!
Gibbs acting like a f***** woman throwing s tantrum lol. This made me laugh. Can you really picture Gibbs doing that? NO!
6/11/2020 c2 dmvan
Very suspenseful beginning. These people know Gibbs well.
SLOANE and TORRES?
Loved the repartee between the team and Gibbs . . . and then Sloane.
Scary about the accident, and then the team thought he had been kidnapped.
Definitely not Gibbs like.
Lots of questions, that I'm sure we'll get answers to over the next several chapters!
Very suspenseful beginning. These people know Gibbs well.
SLOANE and TORRES?
Loved the repartee between the team and Gibbs . . . and then Sloane.
Scary about the accident, and then the team thought he had been kidnapped.
Definitely not Gibbs like.
Lots of questions, that I'm sure we'll get answers to over the next several chapters!