for All Because Of5/1 c8 1SiriusFan
I really enjoyed this story. I know you were going for a short story here, but it would be interesting to see this expanded, this story has so much potential. I like that they were in Hufflepuff, that they got support from Professor Sprout, and I like the idea of the letter from the future offering guidance. This was a truly enjoyable story.
I really enjoyed this story. I know you were going for a short story here, but it would be interesting to see this expanded, this story has so much potential. I like that they were in Hufflepuff, that they got support from Professor Sprout, and I like the idea of the letter from the future offering guidance. This was a truly enjoyable story.
3/22 c7 adam.rosen.51
its not a huge deal with this story but you've been inconsistent with Harry's grandparents. Earlier on you said his grandparents were Fleamont and Euphemia (the portraits) and that Charlus was the uncle. So i'm confused about how suddenly Harry is related to the blacks.
its not a huge deal with this story but you've been inconsistent with Harry's grandparents. Earlier on you said his grandparents were Fleamont and Euphemia (the portraits) and that Charlus was the uncle. So i'm confused about how suddenly Harry is related to the blacks.
3/19 c4 Admiral Ackbar
You know, I’ve been reading fanfics for a good 8-9 years now. I think this was the best handling of the Malfoy family I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I laughed my ass off. Kudos to the author.
You know, I’ve been reading fanfics for a good 8-9 years now. I think this was the best handling of the Malfoy family I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I laughed my ass off. Kudos to the author.
3/13 c8 Linda
Awesome story truly loved it
Awesome story truly loved it
10/2/2024 c1 
1Eroldin
Nice. I love how you give a resson for Molly to be what she is. No bashing, but a valid and understandable reason.
1EroldinNice. I love how you give a resson for Molly to be what she is. No bashing, but a valid and understandable reason.
7/30/2024 c8 13Xavras
Nice story
I like how you dealt with Voldemort
and basically blocked out any effect the Weasleys might have had
and the ousting of Malfoy was great
thanks again for a fun and pleasant story
13XavrasNice story
I like how you dealt with Voldemort
and basically blocked out any effect the Weasleys might have had
and the ousting of Malfoy was great
thanks again for a fun and pleasant story
7/24/2024 c8 Gon Freaks
I have to say I really enjoyed your heartwarming story. Thank you for sharing it.
I have to say I really enjoyed your heartwarming story. Thank you for sharing it.
7/23/2024 c5 The Ghostly Minion
Great chapter. There is so much here it’s hard to comment on it all. I am blessed by this story.
TGM
Great chapter. There is so much here it’s hard to comment on it all. I am blessed by this story.
TGM
7/23/2024 c4 The Ghostly Minion
Great chapter.
1. Snape sorted.
2. Malfoy dismissed.
3. , his eyes newly opened.
4. H&D and their three wonderful friends.
It will be interesting to to see Samhain. I’m sure MoRon will be involved. Will it be Neville who saves Hermione from the troll, or will it be a group effort?
TGM
Great chapter.
1. Snape sorted.
2. Malfoy dismissed.
3. , his eyes newly opened.
4. H&D and their three wonderful friends.
It will be interesting to to see Samhain. I’m sure MoRon will be involved. Will it be Neville who saves Hermione from the troll, or will it be a group effort?
TGM
7/23/2024 c3 The Ghostly Minion
Fabulous chapter!
1. Love the way Harry stands up to the MoRon and to Malfoy. Both encounters should get back to others with good effect. Like the way H&D stand up to McGonagall. She is always a broken reed in canon (only the novels and three extra books are canon to me). Maybe this will help.
2. Love their meeting Neville and Hermione! It’s always my hope that in stories in which Harry is not paired with Hermione, that she’s paired with Neville, which is clearly the case here.
3. The Sortings are perfect. Hermione will basically be out of Weasley clutches (though Samhain will be interesting). Neville shows true Gryffindor courage already. H&D’s loyalty to one another makes Hufflepuff the obvious choice. Hopefully, Hannah and Susan will become staunch friends.
TGM
Fabulous chapter!
1. Love the way Harry stands up to the MoRon and to Malfoy. Both encounters should get back to others with good effect. Like the way H&D stand up to McGonagall. She is always a broken reed in canon (only the novels and three extra books are canon to me). Maybe this will help.
2. Love their meeting Neville and Hermione! It’s always my hope that in stories in which Harry is not paired with Hermione, that she’s paired with Neville, which is clearly the case here.
3. The Sortings are perfect. Hermione will basically be out of Weasley clutches (though Samhain will be interesting). Neville shows true Gryffindor courage already. H&D’s loyalty to one another makes Hufflepuff the obvious choice. Hopefully, Hannah and Susan will become staunch friends.
TGM
7/23/2024 c2 The Ghostly Minion
Every relationship has its stresses and H&D’s is no exception. I’m glad of the way it’s worked out.
TGM
Every relationship has its stresses and H&D’s is no exception. I’m glad of the way it’s worked out.
TGM
7/23/2024 c1 The Ghostly Minion
Love this start.
Stories like this that have information that comes from the future to make Harry and someone’s lives better are favorites of mine. One that comes to mind is “The Life of Harry Potter and Hermione's part in it“, by broomstick flyer.
Whilst my OTP is Harmony, Haphne is a favorite secondary pairing for me. Characters aren’t very fleshed out yet and I look forward to learning more as I go on.
TGM
Love this start.
Stories like this that have information that comes from the future to make Harry and someone’s lives better are favorites of mine. One that comes to mind is “The Life of Harry Potter and Hermione's part in it“, by broomstick flyer.
Whilst my OTP is Harmony, Haphne is a favorite secondary pairing for me. Characters aren’t very fleshed out yet and I look forward to learning more as I go on.
TGM