for Hardcore Grinding6/5/2020 c1 avidreader-everafter
I look forward to seeing what you do with this story. best of luck . everafter
I look forward to seeing what you do with this story. best of luck . everafter
6/5/2020 c1 
8MogtheGnome
I like it! The only issue as I was going was the excessive banter the Gamer Power’s voice kept engaging in, it you addressed that in chapter already with izuku setting limits so it’s dialogue is (hopefully) not just constant banter attempts that get repetitive very quickly.
8MogtheGnomeI like it! The only issue as I was going was the excessive banter the Gamer Power’s voice kept engaging in, it you addressed that in chapter already with izuku setting limits so it’s dialogue is (hopefully) not just constant banter attempts that get repetitive very quickly.
6/5/2020 c1 d1n0s
Reccommend using fewer expletives in your story if you want to improve your writing.
Of course reading some good books like Day of the Jackal, Journey to the Center of the Earth, The Man With No Face and others will enhance your writing skills.
Reccommend using fewer expletives in your story if you want to improve your writing.
Of course reading some good books like Day of the Jackal, Journey to the Center of the Earth, The Man With No Face and others will enhance your writing skills.
6/5/2020 c1 soraroxas
I like the direction that this GAMER Izuku is going in. Let's see where this will go.
I like the direction that this GAMER Izuku is going in. Let's see where this will go.
6/5/2020 c1 Siegfried Knighthawk
Where’s the story? I think something might have broken when you tried to load the chapter
Where’s the story? I think something might have broken when you tried to load the chapter
6/5/2020 c1 5Jack Redhawke
Uuuuhhh the chapter is completely fuckied and is a bunch of gibberish, something has gone terribly awry
5Jack RedhawkeUuuuhhh the chapter is completely fuckied and is a bunch of gibberish, something has gone terribly awry
6/5/2020 c1 Rasengalia
Either something went wrong and I’m just seeing gibberish coding or you are trying out some new avant-garde writing style. Hope it gets fixed the story summary sounds extremely interesting.
Either something went wrong and I’m just seeing gibberish coding or you are trying out some new avant-garde writing style. Hope it gets fixed the story summary sounds extremely interesting.