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6/12/2020 c1 3Lerrinus
Beautiful! I can see this happening in the show! Well done! Keep up the fantastic work! :-)
6/7/2020 c1 26Iniki Melset
I never expected the story idea you mentioned to be realized so quickly! This is beautiful - KIra's percepion of Garak, Garak's feelings about Ziyal, his concealed grief, his self-perception which is actually a kind of self-loathing, his realizing that his and Ziyal's love would not have lasted as she had refused to see the evil in him... very well described and touching.

This work is highly emotional without being overtly so, every feeling is implied, especially when Garak and Kira talk about Ziyal and show in small gestures and reactions just how much they miss her. You got the two characters exactly right.

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