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9/16/2020 c1 277kstar
You have a nice one-shot, but the wrong words and awkward phrases ruin the overall effect. I get it; I do it too. One thing I found that helps is to read the sentence Outloud. Also, try looking at it backwards. Sometimes it just pops out at you.

I do like seeing Athos and d'Artagnan bonding.
6/9/2020 c1 1pallysAramisRios
I may have read this before but it was even better the second time around loved it!
6/9/2020 c1 UIa
loved that Dart even sick was not useless and basically saved the day

well done...God bless

to gain more reviews I think you need to upload this on A03 site
6/8/2020 c1 NovelCy
I love this and by far one of my favorite stories I’ve read.
6/8/2020 c1 beeblegirl
Thank you. A little bit of D’Art and Athos together is always sweet.

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