for Elements and Man Power(Old Version)11/3/2024 c4 Animeworld2.0
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Hello, I hope you're doing well!
This is "Anime World" YouTube channel, where I share fanfiction stories with an audience that loves listening to them. I recently came across your story and found it so captivating that I would love to share it with my subscribers.
Channel link: Animeworldfanfic
With your permission, I would be honored to create a video of your story. I will give full credit to you as the original author in the video description and provide a link back to your original work. Additionally, I will share the video link in the comments of your story so you can see it for yourself.
I genuinely believe your story deserves to reach an even wider audience. Our channel is supported by the community, allowing us to continue spreading great stories like yours to new fans. If you have any suggestions, such as a preferred "What If" title or any other changes you'd like, I'd be more than happy to accommodate them.
Please let me know if this would be okay with you. Thank you so much for considering my request, and I hope to hear from you soon!
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3/31/2021 c7 Hiccstridisreal
I have a question, I know it's a harem, but if you are only going to see 4 people. Wouldn't it be better to make it a polyamorous relationship? You already know that all parties love each other equally? That way I did not open jealousy
I have a question, I know it's a harem, but if you are only going to see 4 people. Wouldn't it be better to make it a polyamorous relationship? You already know that all parties love each other equally? That way I did not open jealousy
12/9/2020 c20 Chaoticwolf97
Hi Jay I've found this story only recently and I have to say I'm enjoying it immensely the way you've written the characters is really cool and I plan to check out the new version soon I'll leave a review when I've read it
Hi Jay I've found this story only recently and I have to say I'm enjoying it immensely the way you've written the characters is really cool and I plan to check out the new version soon I'll leave a review when I've read it
12/7/2020 c8 Guest
There are enough female characters in “My Hero Academia” that there is no need to take male characters and make them female. As Eraserhead would say it’s just not rational.
There are enough female characters in “My Hero Academia” that there is no need to take male characters and make them female. As Eraserhead would say it’s just not rational.
11/11/2020 c1 
4JayTheStar
Ok so everyone, I decided to rewrite. Just because I have no idea with where this is going and I get no enjoyment in writing it. But instead of just abandoning the story I want to try a rewrite and see if that works. Anyways yeah, things will, hopefully, be more fleshed out and characters will be more consistent, and I want to explain Bakugo and Midoriya's dynamic better. Because in this story they aren't bully and victim but Bakugo and extra, who becomes a rival.
4JayTheStarOk so everyone, I decided to rewrite. Just because I have no idea with where this is going and I get no enjoyment in writing it. But instead of just abandoning the story I want to try a rewrite and see if that works. Anyways yeah, things will, hopefully, be more fleshed out and characters will be more consistent, and I want to explain Bakugo and Midoriya's dynamic better. Because in this story they aren't bully and victim but Bakugo and extra, who becomes a rival.
11/10/2020 c3 7ZexyZane
Ughhhh... You had the premise, and the plot figured out, but you lack the ability to properly explain the atmosphere in the story. You rushed the conversations and seemingly skipped all the important vices needed to make the story similar or at least believable as it was on canon.
If I were you, I'd rewrite it from the bottom up and renew the plotline to rectify the losses you would've achieved the favorability of this fic.
7ZexyZaneUghhhh... You had the premise, and the plot figured out, but you lack the ability to properly explain the atmosphere in the story. You rushed the conversations and seemingly skipped all the important vices needed to make the story similar or at least believable as it was on canon.
If I were you, I'd rewrite it from the bottom up and renew the plotline to rectify the losses you would've achieved the favorability of this fic.
11/6/2020 c20 AnimeFan13579
Yeah Kirishima would totally want Katsuki to give it his all no holding back showing off how "manly" he is is a big deal for her.
Yeah Kirishima would totally want Katsuki to give it his all no holding back showing off how "manly" he is is a big deal for her.
9/25/2020 c19 Guest
I mean... if it makes a difference, I think Izuku’s relationships are coming along nicely. You gotta remember, they’re young and new to these types of scenarios. Everyone progresses differently. Eiko seems the type of person to stay close, but hold back on confessing. And Eiko’s love interest in this hates beating around the bush. Meanwhile the others are super shy around each other.
I mean... if it makes a difference, I think Izuku’s relationships are coming along nicely. You gotta remember, they’re young and new to these types of scenarios. Everyone progresses differently. Eiko seems the type of person to stay close, but hold back on confessing. And Eiko’s love interest in this hates beating around the bush. Meanwhile the others are super shy around each other.
9/25/2020 c19 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Very cool battle scenes, and nice to show how the students interact with each other between combats.
Keep the good writing.
50acosta perez jose ramiroVery cool battle scenes, and nice to show how the students interact with each other between combats.
Keep the good writing.
9/14/2020 c1 Guest
There are High Schools with dorms in England and Europe they are rather common. Japan has some as well. There are also military academy’s and religious faith based schools in the United States. I don’t know why some people think that only Colleges have on site housing
There are High Schools with dorms in England and Europe they are rather common. Japan has some as well. There are also military academy’s and religious faith based schools in the United States. I don’t know why some people think that only Colleges have on site housing
9/15/2020 c17 Nabe-Chan
what?
you can just throw away endeavors redemption arc like that?
the hell is this?
you didnt even show how he changed. or what happened to him to to cause such change. you're rushing to much and replacing it with filler chapters.
not even mentioning the power scaling.
you made shinso and asshole then casted him aside. i know its your fic and you can do what you want. but i havent seen a single character development in this fic.
i can tell that your only focus is to make izuku look good and his harem. shoko change immediately that i thought i skipped a chapter.
izuku is still the same kid as before. still self-loathing, awkward, shy boy, then the next scene he's a hot, cool, charismatic guy that can beat anyone, then he comes back from being a shy kid. character development is very important in a story.
this story has potential and still enjoyable when you ignore the holes. but i hope you improve your writing for coming chapters. sorry for the rant. i want to see this fic improve.
what?
you can just throw away endeavors redemption arc like that?
the hell is this?
you didnt even show how he changed. or what happened to him to to cause such change. you're rushing to much and replacing it with filler chapters.
not even mentioning the power scaling.
you made shinso and asshole then casted him aside. i know its your fic and you can do what you want. but i havent seen a single character development in this fic.
i can tell that your only focus is to make izuku look good and his harem. shoko change immediately that i thought i skipped a chapter.
izuku is still the same kid as before. still self-loathing, awkward, shy boy, then the next scene he's a hot, cool, charismatic guy that can beat anyone, then he comes back from being a shy kid. character development is very important in a story.
this story has potential and still enjoyable when you ignore the holes. but i hope you improve your writing for coming chapters. sorry for the rant. i want to see this fic improve.