
12/9/2022 c10 SlyFox9
About time that monster is killed.
Will Naruto ever try to infiltrate Shinra HQ soon? Probably gather intelligence and maybe do mischievous pranks on the Executives (except for Reeves) and sabotage their equipments. Also how many more will Cloud show up?
Anyway keep up the good work.
About time that monster is killed.
Will Naruto ever try to infiltrate Shinra HQ soon? Probably gather intelligence and maybe do mischievous pranks on the Executives (except for Reeves) and sabotage their equipments. Also how many more will Cloud show up?
Anyway keep up the good work.
12/1/2022 c3 SlyFox9
Awesome matches that Naruto faced. Also careful on how many OCs you plan to use in a story. Create or use too many can make the readers lose interest.
Awesome matches that Naruto faced. Also careful on how many OCs you plan to use in a story. Create or use too many can make the readers lose interest.
11/30/2022 c2 SlyFox9
Who are all these characters; Zu Zhang, Maw Maw Meihu, and Tsukiko that mentioned in this chapter? If they are OCs the least you can do is give details on how they are relevant enough to be mentioned.
Who are all these characters; Zu Zhang, Maw Maw Meihu, and Tsukiko that mentioned in this chapter? If they are OCs the least you can do is give details on how they are relevant enough to be mentioned.
11/16/2022 c10
1Rycott
Man, not sending me alert emails for like 8 months mean I miss some things :'D
Just caught up. Good stuff as always.

Man, not sending me alert emails for like 8 months mean I miss some things :'D
Just caught up. Good stuff as always.
10/23/2022 c10 Shadow
Great work!
Great work!
10/22/2022 c1
3randmReader
Can we get a solid statement of how nerfed Naruto is in this story please? I love your writings but since you're pretty vague on powerlevels a proper acknowledgement of Naruto's strength would clarify a lot of "suspend disbelief" moments.
Keep up the good work!

Can we get a solid statement of how nerfed Naruto is in this story please? I love your writings but since you're pretty vague on powerlevels a proper acknowledgement of Naruto's strength would clarify a lot of "suspend disbelief" moments.
Keep up the good work!