for Final Fantasy VII Remake: A Tale Of Midgar Book I4/20 c1 AadenFo
Now i remember why i dropped this story. It seems really good, but its VERY OC naruto, which makes sense considering he came from another story. Still, i think you could do with some sort of summary at the start.
Now i remember why i dropped this story. It seems really good, but its VERY OC naruto, which makes sense considering he came from another story. Still, i think you could do with some sort of summary at the start.
4/10 c1 Lisa-Katagiri
Hey!
I hope you're doing well. I just finished reading your story "Final Fantasy VII Remake: A Tale Of Midgar Book I" and honestly, I really enjoyed it! It gave me so many cool visuals in my head the kind that would look awesome as a comic.
So I just wanted to reach out and say I'm a digital artist and I specialize in turning stories into comics. I’ve done a bunch of these before as commissions, and I thought your story could really shine in comic form! The characters, the humor, the tone it’d all translate beautifully with expressive panels and fun pacing.
I’m currently open for commissions and if you’re at all curious about turning your story into a comic, I’d love to chat more! No pressure at all even if you're just exploring the idea. :)
You can reply here or add me on Discord: lisakatagiri
Thanks for reading, and again loved your story!
Lisa
Hey!
I hope you're doing well. I just finished reading your story "Final Fantasy VII Remake: A Tale Of Midgar Book I" and honestly, I really enjoyed it! It gave me so many cool visuals in my head the kind that would look awesome as a comic.
So I just wanted to reach out and say I'm a digital artist and I specialize in turning stories into comics. I’ve done a bunch of these before as commissions, and I thought your story could really shine in comic form! The characters, the humor, the tone it’d all translate beautifully with expressive panels and fun pacing.
I’m currently open for commissions and if you’re at all curious about turning your story into a comic, I’d love to chat more! No pressure at all even if you're just exploring the idea. :)
You can reply here or add me on Discord: lisakatagiri
Thanks for reading, and again loved your story!
Lisa
4/8 c16 
1rykott
Looking forward to Corneo really getting what he deserves, unlike the original game where he got a simple death.
I have a feeling when he messes with Aerith, he's not going to get a simple clean death.
1rykottLooking forward to Corneo really getting what he deserves, unlike the original game where he got a simple death.
I have a feeling when he messes with Aerith, he's not going to get a simple clean death.
4/7 c16 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter but dont get ke wrong but among Tifa, Aerith and Jessie. Jessie is the LEAST interesting(imo) so im confused but kinda intrigued? But honestpy im waiting for more aerith or tifa interactions in the romance part of the story
All other is really great for me i love how naruto still upholds his promise to jiraiya and nagato by trying to help bereet and the others
Again my complaint with the romance is just really minor and also probably personal so other than that its really good
Great Chapter but dont get ke wrong but among Tifa, Aerith and Jessie. Jessie is the LEAST interesting(imo) so im confused but kinda intrigued? But honestpy im waiting for more aerith or tifa interactions in the romance part of the story
All other is really great for me i love how naruto still upholds his promise to jiraiya and nagato by trying to help bereet and the others
Again my complaint with the romance is just really minor and also probably personal so other than that its really good
4/7 c16 Random guy
This was a good chapter. Here I am hoping the FF13 characters play a large role in this story, especially Lightning. I also really like the dilemma Naruto is facing.
On the other hand, I really disliked how Kurama was taking blame for the death of Naruto's parents. Kushina was murdered by Obito when he extracted Kurama from her seal, and Minato performed a suicide ritual technique. When Kurama impaled Kushina and Minato on his claw, they were fated to die. It's important to clarify these facts, or Naruto's friendship with Kurama would destroy a person's suspension of disbelief.
This was a good chapter. Here I am hoping the FF13 characters play a large role in this story, especially Lightning. I also really like the dilemma Naruto is facing.
On the other hand, I really disliked how Kurama was taking blame for the death of Naruto's parents. Kushina was murdered by Obito when he extracted Kurama from her seal, and Minato performed a suicide ritual technique. When Kurama impaled Kushina and Minato on his claw, they were fated to die. It's important to clarify these facts, or Naruto's friendship with Kurama would destroy a person's suspension of disbelief.
4/6 c16 codywhite162
I am really happy to see this story get updated once again. It is such an amazing one to read. Everything in this chapter was great: from Naruto having a hard talk with Barret about his actions and the consequences thereof, Naruto being intimate with Jessie which I quite enjoyed and hopefully they will become actual lovers soon, Aerith being the minx that she is wants a threesome with Naruto and Jessie, and Corneo is being slimy as usual. I am definitely excited to find out what will happen next.
I am really happy to see this story get updated once again. It is such an amazing one to read. Everything in this chapter was great: from Naruto having a hard talk with Barret about his actions and the consequences thereof, Naruto being intimate with Jessie which I quite enjoyed and hopefully they will become actual lovers soon, Aerith being the minx that she is wants a threesome with Naruto and Jessie, and Corneo is being slimy as usual. I am definitely excited to find out what will happen next.
4/6 c16 JensenDaniels32
Nodded. WUTOO WEETAUR WAII WAII! Yes. EIGH EIGH EIGH EIGH EIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGH! *Smashes head on the keyboard until it starts making the squeaking sound you get from a rubber duckie.* XD
Nodded. WUTOO WEETAUR WAII WAII! Yes. EIGH EIGH EIGH EIGH EIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGHEIGH! *Smashes head on the keyboard until it starts making the squeaking sound you get from a rubber duckie.* XD
4/6 c16 Guest
well the relationship front certainly progressed this chapter, im still confused about wat the pairing for naruto is and if it is a single or harem one
well the relationship front certainly progressed this chapter, im still confused about wat the pairing for naruto is and if it is a single or harem one
4/6 c16 KakeruPB
Hmm, i say have Aerith be with Naruto. A lot of time has already pass with Zack gone. She is also interested in Naruto to so its only natural.
Hmm, i say have Aerith be with Naruto. A lot of time has already pass with Zack gone. She is also interested in Naruto to so its only natural.
4/6 c16 SPark681
Hmm, seems Don Corneo is about to sign his death warrant lol anyways keep up the great work!
Hmm, seems Don Corneo is about to sign his death warrant lol anyways keep up the great work!