
10/24/2020 c7 Guest
Great story ️️️
Great story ️️️
10/3/2020 c2 dracostylez
lmfaooo if draco is a smut reader fan he should def be looking up on fanfics online
lmfaooo if draco is a smut reader fan he should def be looking up on fanfics online
9/19/2020 c2 TheGirlWhoWaited
I love love love this story and basically all your others as well. Not too far into chapter 2 I came across a sentence where Draco says “I’m a ‘gluten’ for punishment...” As opposed to “glutton” I swear to you I haven’t been able to stop thinking about that typo...every time I see gluten free bread or the like, my mind shifts to gluten free punishment and it is the best. I know authors don’t strive for typos but this one truly has made me smile so much since reading. There is a sign on this strip club I pass on my drive into work each morning where they have posted that they offer “gluten free lap dances” that is probably why I find it so humorous. Thank you for a super sexy story, I can’t wait to finish reading it :)
I love love love this story and basically all your others as well. Not too far into chapter 2 I came across a sentence where Draco says “I’m a ‘gluten’ for punishment...” As opposed to “glutton” I swear to you I haven’t been able to stop thinking about that typo...every time I see gluten free bread or the like, my mind shifts to gluten free punishment and it is the best. I know authors don’t strive for typos but this one truly has made me smile so much since reading. There is a sign on this strip club I pass on my drive into work each morning where they have posted that they offer “gluten free lap dances” that is probably why I find it so humorous. Thank you for a super sexy story, I can’t wait to finish reading it :)
6/25/2020 c7
9khaleesiunburnt
This was really great! The entire thing was riveting and steamy. I do have a little bit of a problem with some places in the story were you jumped from past tense to present tense and back again. But I think a quick edit would fix them pretty quickly. There were a couple of places where I could Britpick as well, but all in all, fantastic little story you have here. Great job and keep writing!

This was really great! The entire thing was riveting and steamy. I do have a little bit of a problem with some places in the story were you jumped from past tense to present tense and back again. But I think a quick edit would fix them pretty quickly. There were a couple of places where I could Britpick as well, but all in all, fantastic little story you have here. Great job and keep writing!
6/22/2020 c7 Guest
Fantastic! This story is sooo cool. Thank you for amazing idea with Hermione's stories. I didn't know that Draco is such a lecher. I would like to translate this story for russian audience, and I would be really greatful if you would give me a permission. Wish you inspiration for futher work!
Fantastic! This story is sooo cool. Thank you for amazing idea with Hermione's stories. I didn't know that Draco is such a lecher. I would like to translate this story for russian audience, and I would be really greatful if you would give me a permission. Wish you inspiration for futher work!
6/22/2020 c7 Violent-Asp
Loved the end where you know she goes on to soil all sorts of undies with her saucy words. Enjoyed this very much!
Loved the end where you know she goes on to soil all sorts of undies with her saucy words. Enjoyed this very much!
6/17/2020 c6 catita55555
I literally swooned. And I just realised there's only one chapter left and that's distressing.
I literally swooned. And I just realised there's only one chapter left and that's distressing.