
10/5/2021 c2 Anonymous
Oh my god! Please update? I love it. I'll keep a lookout for any updates. Keep writing!
Oh my god! Please update? I love it. I'll keep a lookout for any updates. Keep writing!
12/2/2020 c2 Guest
Love slutty james and lily! They're so in love here, you wrote them perfect
Love slutty james and lily! They're so in love here, you wrote them perfect
12/1/2020 c2 Guest
Oh my god, this was so damn sexy! The cherry on top however has to be Sirius at the end. I cannot believe how hot this was.
Oh my god, this was so damn sexy! The cherry on top however has to be Sirius at the end. I cannot believe how hot this was.
11/4/2020 c2
13scriibble
I love that you felt weird about writing smut for the first time, because you had nothing to worry about. You CRUSHED it. I would have thought you'd been writing smut for ages-which is a compliment, of course, although a strange one. :) It's so good.
I absolutely love Lily and James' chemistry juxtaposed with the horrors of the party, and I love their constant flirtatious banter the whole time. This is seriously so well-written and sexy and charming and humorous and you strike such a good balance between all those things.

I love that you felt weird about writing smut for the first time, because you had nothing to worry about. You CRUSHED it. I would have thought you'd been writing smut for ages-which is a compliment, of course, although a strange one. :) It's so good.
I absolutely love Lily and James' chemistry juxtaposed with the horrors of the party, and I love their constant flirtatious banter the whole time. This is seriously so well-written and sexy and charming and humorous and you strike such a good balance between all those things.
10/23/2020 c1 Guest
This has to be the best jily smut I’ve ever read and it’s basically just been foreplay at this point. The power u hold scares me and amazes me
This has to be the best jily smut I’ve ever read and it’s basically just been foreplay at this point. The power u hold scares me and amazes me
10/21/2020 c2 Guest
So great ! Can't wait for next chapter!
So great ! Can't wait for next chapter!
7/3/2020 c1 liz
hi, that was absolutely superb, heaven knows I would love to speak my mind like that to all idiots Ive come across, please keep up the excellent work :)
hi, that was absolutely superb, heaven knows I would love to speak my mind like that to all idiots Ive come across, please keep up the excellent work :)