for New World: Beginnings2/25 c1 adamfranklin.uu
The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format and I'm anxious to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece, I look forward to hearing more of your stories!
The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format and I'm anxious to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece, I look forward to hearing more of your stories!
91/18/2022 c19 Daboop Jones
little heavy on the constant beatings. like girl was army! let's see some of that training! army makes some tough bitches and yea I get she's got some trauma, but dang it gets exausing reading bout her constantly bein smacked around and crying. I'm sure she has some training to fall back on, but she's acting like a civilian.
other than that, it's alright, not too much has actually changed up till this point. would been nice if Merle was ok. and the Daryl and Alex floof is sweet.
little heavy on the constant beatings. like girl was army! let's see some of that training! army makes some tough bitches and yea I get she's got some trauma, but dang it gets exausing reading bout her constantly bein smacked around and crying. I'm sure she has some training to fall back on, but she's acting like a civilian.
other than that, it's alright, not too much has actually changed up till this point. would been nice if Merle was ok. and the Daryl and Alex floof is sweet.
7/15/2021 c17 jamielynn25
Poor alex. How many almost rapes and beating can one person take before she goes postal and kills everyone. Can’t wait to read more
Poor alex. How many almost rapes and beating can one person take before she goes postal and kills everyone. Can’t wait to read more