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7/1/2020 c9 1geetac
Its sad that about Harry.
7/1/2020 c9 7Freudentraene
Beautiful chapter! I loved the figurative language that Harry, Fleur and Bill used in the second half. The last sentence of the chapter is just great.
6/30/2020 c8 Linda
Really love the story hope to read more soon
6/29/2020 c7 Guest
keep this going it is good
7/1/2020 c9 Kendtimo
More please! I love the flow of the story. I hope it goes on for awhile. I also like your chapter length. I usually like a little longer chapters but the story you tell in these is really good. I'm eagerly waiting for more
7/1/2020 c9 welcome007
so gooood
6/30/2020 c8 welcome007
good reasoning
6/30/2020 c8 Dault3883 Barron Backslash
the horocrux was in harry as proven in the train scene with dumbledore which is essentially harry's version of Limbo because he saw Kingscross as his gateway to the magical world

as for the resurection stone if you were leaning more muggle it would make since to me BUT its Harry potter its the Magical world and everything is essentially possible with Magic

To quote the harry potter quote that believe originates its self in fanfiction

when harry is asked how he did something by some one he simply states "magic" (with a shrug of the shoulders)
6/30/2020 c8 anarion87
good chapter
6/30/2020 c8 wolf970
too short.
6/30/2020 c8 Hank1967
Good chapter. A little bit short though. I like the twist you've got on the Resurrection Stone, having it be like the Mirror of Erised. Very unique that! I do wish you would have spent a bit more time on the introspection that was happening at the end of the chapter. That was very interesting, but not fleshed out fully enough. I would have also liked to have seen a bit more on the wand and the cloak, too. They are very unique magical constructs, whether from Death or not, and you could develop a mythos of some sort around them. Can't wait to see what's next!
6/29/2020 c7 14thunderofdeath97
hermione is back to her old shit it seems, and i hope she realizes that harry doesn't have to listen to her, also why would or should he have to take her? i mean no offense but he is a big boy, he can handle himself
6/29/2020 c7 Dault3883 Barron Backslash
good chapter cant wait for the next one

hermione did make a mistake she should move into grimauld house (as only a room mate)
6/29/2020 c7 Shadowdog11
Good chapter. Can’t wait to see how the verifying her claims goes.
6/29/2020 c7 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Sorry to see that Ron is acting totally in character. I suppose he learned nothing from his adventures in the war. I don't see why he thinks Harry should take him along for the interview - I wouldn't even take the loser to the pub. As far as Ginny goes, I'm glad to see Harry acting with maturity; other than Quidditch he really doesn't have anything in common with Ginny (which, oddly enough, is JKR's fault as she never developed her character in the canon). Also, the girl is too quick tempered and violent (the only aspects developed in canon). It would be a mismatch. Harry needs someone who can stand beside him and give him the peace he's looking for. Glad to see that Harry has good relations with Bill and Fleur. Also glad to see Daphne willing to assist Harry in his endeavor. Hopefully he will do the same for her. Great job!
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