for High Tide (A Corlys Velaryon SI)11/11 c49 1210justinp
I'm quite surprised the Targaryens are still alive. They are kinda cursed with bad luck. The number of dragons are also concerning. And where the hell is Corlys? I've read less and less of him as the story goes on, will he be back?
I'm quite surprised the Targaryens are still alive. They are kinda cursed with bad luck. The number of dragons are also concerning. And where the hell is Corlys? I've read less and less of him as the story goes on, will he be back?
10/23 c4 1210justinp
I've read a bunch of HOTD FFs now and Corlys is such a good character, but this fanfic is just so boring. I'm sorry, I gave this a few chances and it just never hooked me.
I've read a bunch of HOTD FFs now and Corlys is such a good character, but this fanfic is just so boring. I'm sorry, I gave this a few chances and it just never hooked me.
10/18 c1 
2AzraelKaizer
The anti plagiarism checks are my favorite part of the story within the first chapter. They were so unexpected I burst out laughing. Would it be okay if I used a similar technique for my stories?
2AzraelKaizerThe anti plagiarism checks are my favorite part of the story within the first chapter. They were so unexpected I burst out laughing. Would it be okay if I used a similar technique for my stories?
10/2 c19 Guest
Quite a while i read a story like jaehaerys bashing...
Quite a while i read a story like jaehaerys bashing...
8/22 c74 Blasian Malaysian
The statue of Liberty, and it's gay poem, is a jewish psyop to get Americans to open their border. The poem is routinely quoted as official immigration policy, but it was written by a zionist jewess.
The statue of Liberty, and it's gay poem, is a jewish psyop to get Americans to open their border. The poem is routinely quoted as official immigration policy, but it was written by a zionist jewess.
8/13 c75 Airchampion
It’s finally over, after a lifespan of 4 years with myself starting to read it back during 2022, I can’t help but feel wishful over how long this fic existed and how long I been reading. I’m glad I got into this fic and was able to follow it to the end, while I prefer the Targaryens over the Velaryons, I still came to like individual members of Housr Velaryon. The Velaryon empire growing the way it did after the Dance wasn’t surprising especially given the Targaryen couldn’t stop them, but I glad to see how both Houses ended up.
I’m curious about each High King of Westeros, but I understand that ultimately it more important to learn about the Velaryons. Either way this was a great fic and one I would recommend to anyone interested in a ASOIAF fanfic, so for one last time, good job.
It’s finally over, after a lifespan of 4 years with myself starting to read it back during 2022, I can’t help but feel wishful over how long this fic existed and how long I been reading. I’m glad I got into this fic and was able to follow it to the end, while I prefer the Targaryens over the Velaryons, I still came to like individual members of Housr Velaryon. The Velaryon empire growing the way it did after the Dance wasn’t surprising especially given the Targaryen couldn’t stop them, but I glad to see how both Houses ended up.
I’m curious about each High King of Westeros, but I understand that ultimately it more important to learn about the Velaryons. Either way this was a great fic and one I would recommend to anyone interested in a ASOIAF fanfic, so for one last time, good job.
8/9 c74 Blasian Malaysian
Seriously bro, are you a thirsty Indian or a virgin loser? Are you fat rostie? Why is your fic is full of sex like an India man wet dream?
Seriously bro, are you a thirsty Indian or a virgin loser? Are you fat rostie? Why is your fic is full of sex like an India man wet dream?
8/9 c73 Blasian Malaysian
Inflation caused by the boomers greed and selfishness knowing in the future that its their grand kids the Millennials and Zoomers who will suffer.
Like inflation your Charecters cowardice will affect their children and risk more death. Killing the Targaryens will save many lives in the future and prevent future conflicts which are bound to happen.
Boomer may never suffer hyper-inflation and great recession they would die be for that, but the Zoomers will suffer and die.
Karma is blind. Karma is a bitch. Karma is consequences. To much wisdom is cowardice. To much wisdom and mercy is unnatural. Nature is life, and everything else is death.
Do not fish in the rubicon. Go all out.
Inflation caused by the boomers greed and selfishness knowing in the future that its their grand kids the Millennials and Zoomers who will suffer.
Like inflation your Charecters cowardice will affect their children and risk more death. Killing the Targaryens will save many lives in the future and prevent future conflicts which are bound to happen.
Boomer may never suffer hyper-inflation and great recession they would die be for that, but the Zoomers will suffer and die.
Karma is blind. Karma is a bitch. Karma is consequences. To much wisdom is cowardice. To much wisdom and mercy is unnatural. Nature is life, and everything else is death.
Do not fish in the rubicon. Go all out.
8/9 c73 Blasian Malaysian
I am sorry for assuming your Jewish. You’re a fucking Indian Pajeet(streetshitter)!
I am sorry for assuming your Jewish. You’re a fucking Indian Pajeet(streetshitter)!
8/8 c61 Blasian Malaysian
Excuse me, Mr. Cuck,
Why does your characters reek of soy? If your story was realistic and not tainted with your 21 century western cuckoldry, the husband would have beaten the shit out of his disobedient wife. A real man would have slapped his mouthy wife or beaten her unconscious, a dragon rider or not.
A conservative medieval male would have not given a shit or two on the opinion of his wife. A wife is expected to obey and follow her husband, and give him children of course. The concept of love and courtship wasnt widespread till the late medival era ,when were holding lands and given inheritance.
What should have happen is like I said before is beating the living shit out of her. 2- He could have said “I know you do not love me what so, but as my wife you shall fulfill your ‘wifely duties’. I do not care if you love me, its fine if you do not, what I want you to love is OUR children. Did everything for them because I love OUR children more than you. Whether you hate me or love me I do not care as long you love our children and never betray me and contine being an obedient and loyal and truthful wife. You can keep your secret from me as I can have mine, we both are on individuals after all. But woe to you if its antagonizing to OUR children and me. You subversive Kike! You really want to hammer on the idea that women in the middle ages were running the household. Bitch in your on religion Judaism, a man who teach his daughter how to read is like a man grooming his daughter to become a whore.
Why you bring politics in your story Kike? You say that China is committing genocide while be fucking silent when Israel is genociding Palestinians. I hope ripe your ass a new one filthy kike.
Excuse me, Mr. Cuck,
Why does your characters reek of soy? If your story was realistic and not tainted with your 21 century western cuckoldry, the husband would have beaten the shit out of his disobedient wife. A real man would have slapped his mouthy wife or beaten her unconscious, a dragon rider or not.
A conservative medieval male would have not given a shit or two on the opinion of his wife. A wife is expected to obey and follow her husband, and give him children of course. The concept of love and courtship wasnt widespread till the late medival era ,when were holding lands and given inheritance.
What should have happen is like I said before is beating the living shit out of her. 2- He could have said “I know you do not love me what so, but as my wife you shall fulfill your ‘wifely duties’. I do not care if you love me, its fine if you do not, what I want you to love is OUR children. Did everything for them because I love OUR children more than you. Whether you hate me or love me I do not care as long you love our children and never betray me and contine being an obedient and loyal and truthful wife. You can keep your secret from me as I can have mine, we both are on individuals after all. But woe to you if its antagonizing to OUR children and me. You subversive Kike! You really want to hammer on the idea that women in the middle ages were running the household. Bitch in your on religion Judaism, a man who teach his daughter how to read is like a man grooming his daughter to become a whore.
Why you bring politics in your story Kike? You say that China is committing genocide while be fucking silent when Israel is genociding Palestinians. I hope ripe your ass a new one filthy kike.
8/8 c75 3naruto-maker
Not gonna lie this end of the being one of my favorite stories. I have been on this website since I was 13 I am now 27. This is one of the better stories probably in my top 20. I don't usually write reviews but I love your writing style is very descriptive and I hope you continue to make stuff like this. I know it's very time consuming But you do bring joy to other people by doing this and I appreciate It
3naruto-makerNot gonna lie this end of the being one of my favorite stories. I have been on this website since I was 13 I am now 27. This is one of the better stories probably in my top 20. I don't usually write reviews but I love your writing style is very descriptive and I hope you continue to make stuff like this. I know it's very time consuming But you do bring joy to other people by doing this and I appreciate It