for High Tide (A Corlys Velaryon SI)8/8/2024 c61 Blasian Malaysian
Excuse me, Mr. Cuck,
Why does your characters reek of soy? If your story was realistic and not tainted with your 21 century western cuckoldry, the husband would have beaten the shit out of his disobedient wife. A real man would have slapped his mouthy wife or beaten her unconscious, a dragon rider or not.
A conservative medieval male would have not given a shit or two on the opinion of his wife. A wife is expected to obey and follow her husband, and give him children of course. The concept of love and courtship wasnt widespread till the late medival era ,when were holding lands and given inheritance.
What should have happen is like I said before is beating the living shit out of her. 2- He could have said “I know you do not love me what so, but as my wife you shall fulfill your ‘wifely duties’. I do not care if you love me, its fine if you do not, what I want you to love is OUR children. Did everything for them because I love OUR children more than you. Whether you hate me or love me I do not care as long you love our children and never betray me and contine being an obedient and loyal and truthful wife. You can keep your secret from me as I can have mine, we both are on individuals after all. But woe to you if its antagonizing to OUR children and me. You subversive Kike! You really want to hammer on the idea that women in the middle ages were running the household. Bitch in your on religion Judaism, a man who teach his daughter how to read is like a man grooming his daughter to become a whore.
Why you bring politics in your story Kike? You say that China is committing genocide while be fucking silent when Israel is genociding Palestinians. I hope ripe your ass a new one filthy kike.
Excuse me, Mr. Cuck,
Why does your characters reek of soy? If your story was realistic and not tainted with your 21 century western cuckoldry, the husband would have beaten the shit out of his disobedient wife. A real man would have slapped his mouthy wife or beaten her unconscious, a dragon rider or not.
A conservative medieval male would have not given a shit or two on the opinion of his wife. A wife is expected to obey and follow her husband, and give him children of course. The concept of love and courtship wasnt widespread till the late medival era ,when were holding lands and given inheritance.
What should have happen is like I said before is beating the living shit out of her. 2- He could have said “I know you do not love me what so, but as my wife you shall fulfill your ‘wifely duties’. I do not care if you love me, its fine if you do not, what I want you to love is OUR children. Did everything for them because I love OUR children more than you. Whether you hate me or love me I do not care as long you love our children and never betray me and contine being an obedient and loyal and truthful wife. You can keep your secret from me as I can have mine, we both are on individuals after all. But woe to you if its antagonizing to OUR children and me. You subversive Kike! You really want to hammer on the idea that women in the middle ages were running the household. Bitch in your on religion Judaism, a man who teach his daughter how to read is like a man grooming his daughter to become a whore.
Why you bring politics in your story Kike? You say that China is committing genocide while be fucking silent when Israel is genociding Palestinians. I hope ripe your ass a new one filthy kike.
8/8/2024 c75 
3naruto-maker
Not gonna lie this end of the being one of my favorite stories. I have been on this website since I was 13 I am now 27. This is one of the better stories probably in my top 20. I don't usually write reviews but I love your writing style is very descriptive and I hope you continue to make stuff like this. I know it's very time consuming But you do bring joy to other people by doing this and I appreciate It
3naruto-makerNot gonna lie this end of the being one of my favorite stories. I have been on this website since I was 13 I am now 27. This is one of the better stories probably in my top 20. I don't usually write reviews but I love your writing style is very descriptive and I hope you continue to make stuff like this. I know it's very time consuming But you do bring joy to other people by doing this and I appreciate It
8/3/2024 c76 Anaklusmos12345
Have you considered doing a self insert story where the main character reincarnates as a Stark before Aegon's conquest. I think that this would be interesting to do as there are no stories with this premis.
Have you considered doing a self insert story where the main character reincarnates as a Stark before Aegon's conquest. I think that this would be interesting to do as there are no stories with this premis.
8/2/2024 c4 Shin Shin Tanren
velos only about 1500 mi from Quarth. Why would it take 2 months when Corlys has ships that go 100 miles on a slow day? because he has compasses, his ships can sail All day and all night they don't have to anchor at night.
velos only about 1500 mi from Quarth. Why would it take 2 months when Corlys has ships that go 100 miles on a slow day? because he has compasses, his ships can sail All day and all night they don't have to anchor at night.
8/1/2024 c73 Tactus501st
I just have to say wow this story, what ride it was. thank you so very much for writing this wonderful and magical story. It was such an adventure and has to be my number one favorite. Again thank you and I can’t wait to see what next adventure awaits in the next story I’ll see you there
I just have to say wow this story, what ride it was. thank you so very much for writing this wonderful and magical story. It was such an adventure and has to be my number one favorite. Again thank you and I can’t wait to see what next adventure awaits in the next story I’ll see you there
7/30/2024 c75 Tony McNucklz
I suspected where this was going from the moment of his 'connection' to Corlys the first. Fucking love this finish. Certainly a glorious end, and even though a lot of it showcased a much deeper connection to the lore than I have it was still spectacular to see how the storys events echoed through time. So often epilogues leave the reader wondering what came next, usually thinking things get better, but you're never sure. I liked how you did it here, giving a view of how the ripples played out. Man, when the Others wake they're in for a helluva suprise, whether they march out of the North or the east as well.
A spectacular conclusion for these two. Congratulations on seeing it through.
I suspected where this was going from the moment of his 'connection' to Corlys the first. Fucking love this finish. Certainly a glorious end, and even though a lot of it showcased a much deeper connection to the lore than I have it was still spectacular to see how the storys events echoed through time. So often epilogues leave the reader wondering what came next, usually thinking things get better, but you're never sure. I liked how you did it here, giving a view of how the ripples played out. Man, when the Others wake they're in for a helluva suprise, whether they march out of the North or the east as well.
A spectacular conclusion for these two. Congratulations on seeing it through.
7/30/2024 c75 ymrgf
for all blisters preparation for dance, the actual dance is very short and anticlimatic.
for all blisters preparation for dance, the actual dance is very short and anticlimatic.
7/30/2024 c75 2Dscot
Great story enjoyed it very much. it’s nice to see that they were reunited even beyond death. Though I’ll be honest with you would be kind of cool if they were also recited in a different world in a different time and another one of your stories. Thanks for sharing your story. This is probably one of my favorite Game of Thrones fanfiction since you really thought about all possibilities and it wasn’t just canon story retold in a different different way.
2DscotGreat story enjoyed it very much. it’s nice to see that they were reunited even beyond death. Though I’ll be honest with you would be kind of cool if they were also recited in a different world in a different time and another one of your stories. Thanks for sharing your story. This is probably one of my favorite Game of Thrones fanfiction since you really thought about all possibilities and it wasn’t just canon story retold in a different different way.