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6/26 c1 jag389
Good show. good characters. All ways like Marguerite and Ronxon.
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6/20 c1 21Bingo32
This story is well written and the vocabulary is impressive. Readers who are not very, very familiar with the characters will not likely be drawn in. The emotions depicted here draw deeply on the subtext of Marguerite and John’s relationship- no dinosaurs, guns or magic. We spend 1000 plus words in Marguerite’s head without truly coming up against the foil. For me, this is still a great read- but part of me wanted to see Marguerite struggle more with her own attraction.

I include this constructive criticism only because I find it useful myself when readers take the time to review thoroughly.

I wish you were here writing when the site was popping, because your work deserves a bigger audience. You are truly a gifted writer and I hope to read many more of your posts.

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