for Reborn12/12/2023 c63 Guest
Lily Evans is supposed to the brightest witch of her generation.
She doesn't act it.
A huge problem is no one can write a character smarter than they are.
Rowling may be incredibly imaginative but is not that smart.
She admits she is "bad at maths". That also means bad at logical thought.
Imagination and Intelligence are two different things, it is why there are two different words.
Someone should write a story where Lily outsmarts both Albus Dumbledore and Voldemort.
A fic where Lily not only saves Harry but all her family.
You can even make it a twist on the Reaper challenge where Lily is sent back.
Lily Evans is supposed to the brightest witch of her generation.
She doesn't act it.
A huge problem is no one can write a character smarter than they are.
Rowling may be incredibly imaginative but is not that smart.
She admits she is "bad at maths". That also means bad at logical thought.
Imagination and Intelligence are two different things, it is why there are two different words.
Someone should write a story where Lily outsmarts both Albus Dumbledore and Voldemort.
A fic where Lily not only saves Harry but all her family.
You can even make it a twist on the Reaper challenge where Lily is sent back.
12/12/2023 c60 AliceTobor
Someone should write a story where all the heroes leave the planet.
Let the villains run rampant then when Thanos shows up.
Does Not find the Infinity Stones he has a temper tantrum.
And kills 99.9 percent of everything.
Most of the 'ordinary' people in Marvel are too stupid to live.
Someone should write a story where all the heroes leave the planet.
Let the villains run rampant then when Thanos shows up.
Does Not find the Infinity Stones he has a temper tantrum.
And kills 99.9 percent of everything.
Most of the 'ordinary' people in Marvel are too stupid to live.
712/5/2023 c21 xaster99
so Harry slaughters humans but as soon as someone with some power shows up his magic is kinda impotent and just begin punching?
so Harry slaughters humans but as soon as someone with some power shows up his magic is kinda impotent and just begin punching?
12/2/2023 c9 ShadowbaneXX
I may have been a little tough on a few parts of Raven and I should probably do another review there. Raven was clever and while not perfect it showed something. You have grown in your writing from Raven to Reborn and that alone should be something worthy of celebration.
I may have been a little tough on a few parts of Raven and I should probably do another review there. Raven was clever and while not perfect it showed something. You have grown in your writing from Raven to Reborn and that alone should be something worthy of celebration.
11/25/2023 c26 Guest
I'm gonna change all my contacts to Motherfucker, followed by random numbers now.
I'm gonna change all my contacts to Motherfucker, followed by random numbers now.
11/25/2023 c24 Guest
That's crazy. I can only imagine how far someone's obsession over another person can go. But I don't think I have ever thought of someone looking to get knocked up for the sole purpose of being classified as a Milf. I'm sure someone has done it.
That's crazy. I can only imagine how far someone's obsession over another person can go. But I don't think I have ever thought of someone looking to get knocked up for the sole purpose of being classified as a Milf. I'm sure someone has done it.
11/25/2023 c18 Guest
Where's my goddamn omakes?
Where's my goddamn omakes?
11/25/2023 c17 Guest
I think he did fine honestly. It was a pretty damn good fight.
I think he did fine honestly. It was a pretty damn good fight.
11/25/2023 c16 Guest
Did Barton foul in that last omake. He didn't deserve that.
Did Barton foul in that last omake. He didn't deserve that.
11/25/2023 c15 Guest
Rage mode might remind me of the Berserker Armor.
Rage mode might remind me of the Berserker Armor.
11/25/2023 c14 Guest
Nightingale Armor huh... Niiiiiice~
Nightingale Armor huh... Niiiiiice~
11/25/2023 c1 Guest
White hair and gray eyes. I was almost expecting him to be tanned too. If anyone understands, you're my friend, even if you don't want to be. Anyways, first impression!? This has my interest. We move.
White hair and gray eyes. I was almost expecting him to be tanned too. If anyone understands, you're my friend, even if you don't want to be. Anyways, first impression!? This has my interest. We move.