for Reborn10/23/2023 c63 Molenir
Urg, I already said I'm biased against She-Hulk. That show was terrible. But seriously, even here, she is horrible. That dialogue is terrible. She makes a nonsensical comparison, and everyone nods like its profound? Explain please how a career choice in any way relates to how tall someone is? What, can she control whether she grows or shrinks? Perhaps the way Banner controls whether he helps people, or is a scientist or not? And her making this idiotic comparison, makes Banner think shes smart? He is smart, definitely smart enough to see through her stupidity.
Sorry just so annoyed with She-Hulk. I want those hours of my life back.
Urg, I already said I'm biased against She-Hulk. That show was terrible. But seriously, even here, she is horrible. That dialogue is terrible. She makes a nonsensical comparison, and everyone nods like its profound? Explain please how a career choice in any way relates to how tall someone is? What, can she control whether she grows or shrinks? Perhaps the way Banner controls whether he helps people, or is a scientist or not? And her making this idiotic comparison, makes Banner think shes smart? He is smart, definitely smart enough to see through her stupidity.
Sorry just so annoyed with She-Hulk. I want those hours of my life back.
10/23/2023 c62 Molenir
I realize this is a completed fanfic. From last year. But seriously, she-hulk? That was a hot steaming pile of garbage. My own opinion is, there hasn't been a single marvel film since Infinity War.
I realize this is a completed fanfic. From last year. But seriously, she-hulk? That was a hot steaming pile of garbage. My own opinion is, there hasn't been a single marvel film since Infinity War.
10/21/2023 c11 Apollodorus13
After reading your comments at the end and seeing that youre trying to keep thr image of an actual army killer, i should be pointing out that due to how destructive and versatile magic is. This dude should probably be hoping around like a ninja on crack in order to avoid incoming fire or should be as good as Grindelwald in the Fantastic Beast movie where he could almost ShieldCast at the same time, while he himself uses a combination of spells, elements and transfiguration. For instance, why didnt he use lighting or fire on the suit? Why didnt he just summon or transfigure a weighted metal ball and just banish it at him? Why waste so much time and energy on regular spells that were ineffective from the begining? Its well written but the subject matter itself was just Harry using his magic like a gun.
After reading your comments at the end and seeing that youre trying to keep thr image of an actual army killer, i should be pointing out that due to how destructive and versatile magic is. This dude should probably be hoping around like a ninja on crack in order to avoid incoming fire or should be as good as Grindelwald in the Fantastic Beast movie where he could almost ShieldCast at the same time, while he himself uses a combination of spells, elements and transfiguration. For instance, why didnt he use lighting or fire on the suit? Why didnt he just summon or transfigure a weighted metal ball and just banish it at him? Why waste so much time and energy on regular spells that were ineffective from the begining? Its well written but the subject matter itself was just Harry using his magic like a gun.
10/21/2023 c4 Apollodorus13
Ive always hated stories that try to write a recluse MC but in every single one, they give jn to socializing immediately
Ive always hated stories that try to write a recluse MC but in every single one, they give jn to socializing immediately
10/20/2023 c21 
19nagiten
if harry was wearing his gear wouldnt loki scepter not work same as when loki tries it with tony ? since both harry and the Armour are magic and like tony arc reactor harry not coming in full contact with the scepter
19nagitenif harry was wearing his gear wouldnt loki scepter not work same as when loki tries it with tony ? since both harry and the Armour are magic and like tony arc reactor harry not coming in full contact with the scepter
10/18/2023 c49 Nothingburger
The important question is? If he landed in a dessert you definitely need to tell us what kind of dessert! Was it a cake? Pie? Muffin? You can't just say he landed in a dessert and not say which :P
The important question is? If he landed in a dessert you definitely need to tell us what kind of dessert! Was it a cake? Pie? Muffin? You can't just say he landed in a dessert and not say which :P
10/17/2023 c11 Lkenneally
Harry should just transfigure his armor tf he doing sending blasting spells at stane
Harry should just transfigure his armor tf he doing sending blasting spells at stane
10/7/2023 c78 2Fluselwuu
A good kind of ending. Loved it..
and read it all over the last 12 hours in one go...
2FluselwuuA good kind of ending. Loved it..
and read it all over the last 12 hours in one go...
10/5/2023 c78 1Kalen Darkmoon
Great story. Especially loved Stan's cameo near the end. LOL at the omake one too. The man is a legend and may he rest well.
1Kalen DarkmoonGreat story. Especially loved Stan's cameo near the end. LOL at the omake one too. The man is a legend and may he rest well.
10/2/2023 c78 Cryptastic
Yeah this was a rushed chapter - but at least your story has an ending.
Thanks for sharing :)
Yeah this was a rushed chapter - but at least your story has an ending.
Thanks for sharing :)
9/20/2023 c49 hanna
And dropped. Whiny bitch emo harry is so over used, and even if I was coming across it the first time, it's still shit. No-one likes to read about some pathetic power fantasy where the only weakness for the mc is their own past
And dropped. Whiny bitch emo harry is so over used, and even if I was coming across it the first time, it's still shit. No-one likes to read about some pathetic power fantasy where the only weakness for the mc is their own past
9/20/2023 c48 ytrf
Yeah, I'm with the previous comment. This lameness is the cause for me dropping this. Everytime someone tries to controll harry's mind they fail, but harry still ends up losing his mind and turning into an animal
Yeah, I'm with the previous comment. This lameness is the cause for me dropping this. Everytime someone tries to controll harry's mind they fail, but harry still ends up losing his mind and turning into an animal
9/20/2023 c48 hanna
So rage mode equals animal? He loses all sense of self and starts roaring and hitting. Lame
So rage mode equals animal? He loses all sense of self and starts roaring and hitting. Lame
9/20/2023 c43 asd
That line "the fuck" Is becomming quite the cringe. It was a bit funny at the start, as it is a thing I use myself when situation is approriate but you overuse it
That line "the fuck" Is becomming quite the cringe. It was a bit funny at the start, as it is a thing I use myself when situation is approriate but you overuse it