for Reborn9/20/2023 c48 ytrf
Yeah, I'm with the previous comment. This lameness is the cause for me dropping this. Everytime someone tries to controll harry's mind they fail, but harry still ends up losing his mind and turning into an animal
Yeah, I'm with the previous comment. This lameness is the cause for me dropping this. Everytime someone tries to controll harry's mind they fail, but harry still ends up losing his mind and turning into an animal
9/20/2023 c48 hanna
So rage mode equals animal? He loses all sense of self and starts roaring and hitting. Lame
So rage mode equals animal? He loses all sense of self and starts roaring and hitting. Lame
9/20/2023 c43 asd
That line "the fuck" Is becomming quite the cringe. It was a bit funny at the start, as it is a thing I use myself when situation is approriate but you overuse it
That line "the fuck" Is becomming quite the cringe. It was a bit funny at the start, as it is a thing I use myself when situation is approriate but you overuse it
9/19/2023 c16 abuduu
Very scientific... He didn't even try to lift it, he just started to try and break it
Very scientific... He didn't even try to lift it, he just started to try and break it
9/19/2023 c4 asd
I reeeally want to know what second-hand bike costs few hundred. either dollars or euros. A few thousand and you are like to buy a bike that isn't shit. seven thousand and you'll have a great second-hand bike if you weren't cheated
I reeeally want to know what second-hand bike costs few hundred. either dollars or euros. A few thousand and you are like to buy a bike that isn't shit. seven thousand and you'll have a great second-hand bike if you weren't cheated
9/7/2023 c49 Fredward1
Omg this midlife crisis thing and the rage moment are super edgy and annoying. I swear if nothing changes with his outlook and personality after this, itll just be pointless nonsense. If he goes back to being abrasive to everyone, you wrote dogshit. And i have a feeling that he’ll be back to his abrasive personality and dull outlook in 10 chapters
Omg this midlife crisis thing and the rage moment are super edgy and annoying. I swear if nothing changes with his outlook and personality after this, itll just be pointless nonsense. If he goes back to being abrasive to everyone, you wrote dogshit. And i have a feeling that he’ll be back to his abrasive personality and dull outlook in 10 chapters
9/7/2023 c41 Fredward1
Want to take out an army quickly? Fiendfyre. Idk why you dont use it more often when he “can control it”
Want to take out an army quickly? Fiendfyre. Idk why you dont use it more often when he “can control it”
9/7/2023 c28 Fredward1
Oh wow the nonmagical armor is too thick? Why dont you just make it disappear? For fucks sake man
Oh wow the nonmagical armor is too thick? Why dont you just make it disappear? For fucks sake man
9/7/2023 c27 Fredward1
You know what wouldve stopped this? Fiendfyre. He couldve just unleashed it at the portal and it would consume all who came through it
You know what wouldve stopped this? Fiendfyre. He couldve just unleashed it at the portal and it would consume all who came through it
9/7/2023 c22 Fredward1
You said earlier that he’d be perfectly fine after a few minutes of rest. Now after a few minutes of rest he “would probably last a few minutes if he started fighting again”. Inconsistencies
You said earlier that he’d be perfectly fine after a few minutes of rest. Now after a few minutes of rest he “would probably last a few minutes if he started fighting again”. Inconsistencies
9/7/2023 c12 Fredward1
Long overdrawn fights have to be so annoying when it can be solved with a snap of his fingers. I get you wanted to expose more of his abilities and have him interact with tony, but it felt forced. It didnt feel natural when all the reader can think is that the fight shouldve been over before all that happened. Instead you made him crack jokes and get shot up. It was pointless
Long overdrawn fights have to be so annoying when it can be solved with a snap of his fingers. I get you wanted to expose more of his abilities and have him interact with tony, but it felt forced. It didnt feel natural when all the reader can think is that the fight shouldve been over before all that happened. Instead you made him crack jokes and get shot up. It was pointless
9/7/2023 c11 Fredward1
Transfiguration wouldve been the smart thing to do from the get go. Just turn the metal in the armor into styrofoam
Transfiguration wouldve been the smart thing to do from the get go. Just turn the metal in the armor into styrofoam
9/4/2023 c15 ItzJoe
i like the suit ideas, however i think it would be better if enhanced strength and speed didnt come from the armor at all, but rather from his magic or even the hallows changing his bone density and musculature etc putting him at say black panther or spidey level strength speed reflexes etc, rage mode would be better as a trump card, amping harry up to say thor or thanos level strength, that way he's not overpowered but at the same time able to keep up with the others
i like the suit ideas, however i think it would be better if enhanced strength and speed didnt come from the armor at all, but rather from his magic or even the hallows changing his bone density and musculature etc putting him at say black panther or spidey level strength speed reflexes etc, rage mode would be better as a trump card, amping harry up to say thor or thanos level strength, that way he's not overpowered but at the same time able to keep up with the others