
4/19/2023 c37 Armiture
I'm guessing that during the convergence, Harry will use that piece of flesh to kill Malekith and all of the Dark Elves with blood magic. That or simply track him down and kill him before the convergence.
I'm guessing that during the convergence, Harry will use that piece of flesh to kill Malekith and all of the Dark Elves with blood magic. That or simply track him down and kill him before the convergence.
4/17/2023 c78 MaximumAfro98
first of all congratulations with your marriage, and remember if the missus gets mad just press the muffinbutton. secondly, thanks for the amazing story, it was really enjoyable. I also really loved the DBZ abridged references. now enjoy your live good man.
first of all congratulations with your marriage, and remember if the missus gets mad just press the muffinbutton. secondly, thanks for the amazing story, it was really enjoyable. I also really loved the DBZ abridged references. now enjoy your live good man.
4/17/2023 c9 Armiture
I loved the Omake, and the second one was honestly what I expected Harry to do because he had specifically said sleep at her place and not sleep with her.
I loved the Omake, and the second one was honestly what I expected Harry to do because he had specifically said sleep at her place and not sleep with her.
4/17/2023 c1 Armiture
This chapter gives new meaning to the phrase "haunted by his war experiences" doesn't it?
In any case, I enjoyed Raven so I'm giving this story a shot, so far, so good.
This chapter gives new meaning to the phrase "haunted by his war experiences" doesn't it?
In any case, I enjoyed Raven so I'm giving this story a shot, so far, so good.
4/13/2023 c76 stillfreeleader
"I'm sorry, but he pulled you out of hell?"
"One L, but yes my father had sent me there."
Fury narrows his eyes "How did you know how many Ls I used?"
"I'm sorry, but he pulled you out of hell?"
"One L, but yes my father had sent me there."
Fury narrows his eyes "How did you know how many Ls I used?"
3/31/2023 c1
8Midgards Ormen
I’m about three paragraphs in and I already have to say: full stops are your friends, be a friend to them. As in, use them more than once every 42 words. Especially when the sentence is composed of three separate clauses without any conjunctions to so much as pretend they’re joined together.
(Also, yes, I counted, there is a paragraph that starts with a sentence that’s FORTY-TWO words long.)

I’m about three paragraphs in and I already have to say: full stops are your friends, be a friend to them. As in, use them more than once every 42 words. Especially when the sentence is composed of three separate clauses without any conjunctions to so much as pretend they’re joined together.
(Also, yes, I counted, there is a paragraph that starts with a sentence that’s FORTY-TWO words long.)
3/24/2023 c34 Guest
I changed my Password because of your Omake
I changed my Password because of your Omake
3/17/2023 c78
60EdTheBeast
OK. I liked it. I stopped reading it twice, as It felt slow. Not going to lie, it was funny in places and stuck to 'Stans' timeline. It was intriguing in the different combinations of MU and HP. The rush at the end was cute. A good read, it was all the notes that so of threw me off the story. The Omakes were cute, funny, stupid, good, do I need to keep going?
So a good read that I liked that was a bit slow in that all the notes detracted from the story, while the many Omakes was more fun.

OK. I liked it. I stopped reading it twice, as It felt slow. Not going to lie, it was funny in places and stuck to 'Stans' timeline. It was intriguing in the different combinations of MU and HP. The rush at the end was cute. A good read, it was all the notes that so of threw me off the story. The Omakes were cute, funny, stupid, good, do I need to keep going?
So a good read that I liked that was a bit slow in that all the notes detracted from the story, while the many Omakes was more fun.
3/8/2023 c77 Shiaira73
I'm just going to sit here and cross my fingers and hope that Maybe someday you will come back and fix this ending. Honestly, the story deserves it. It was such a great story and then the last 2 or 3 chapters happened. I'm just going to go away in disappointment now. Congratulations on getting married.
I'm just going to sit here and cross my fingers and hope that Maybe someday you will come back and fix this ending. Honestly, the story deserves it. It was such a great story and then the last 2 or 3 chapters happened. I'm just going to go away in disappointment now. Congratulations on getting married.