for Fate: Sword Order12/17/2022 c22 
1W8W
Body double is working despite of everybody seeing change in behavior. Explanation of stress is believable. Salter hating it and sulking is hilarious.
With 3 enemy emperors and 3 saberfaces I think that there is chance that each will fight "Nero" at the same time.
Sending Jalter away to fight on its own is good move she is not much of team player and she will be able to make real devastation in enemy lines even on her own.
Casar made grave mistake let's see how much pain and blood he will pay for it. :)
1W8WBody double is working despite of everybody seeing change in behavior. Explanation of stress is believable. Salter hating it and sulking is hilarious.
With 3 enemy emperors and 3 saberfaces I think that there is chance that each will fight "Nero" at the same time.
Sending Jalter away to fight on its own is good move she is not much of team player and she will be able to make real devastation in enemy lines even on her own.
Casar made grave mistake let's see how much pain and blood he will pay for it. :)
12/16/2022 c22 Bucio
Oh Jeanne, right now you laugh, but later...
Meanwhile, for the moment, it seems that Nero's enemies are ancient Emperors of Rome, that someone, the real enemy, brought back as Servants, with Arturia and Jeanne Alter, facing Cesar, who because of his words and insults, he's going to earn a beating, courtesy of Saber Alter.
While Shirou, Ritsuka, and Mash, face the other Servant.
And while that's happening in Rome, how are things going with Ophelia and Olga? And by the way, while I'm very pro-Arturia, maybe one of the many fights and confrontations between Jeanne and Arturia Alter, would give Ophelia the chance she needs to get to know Shirou better, maybe with him cooking something for her, which would make Ophelia the envy of the Alters,... and Olga.
Good luck and keep it up
Oh Jeanne, right now you laugh, but later...
Meanwhile, for the moment, it seems that Nero's enemies are ancient Emperors of Rome, that someone, the real enemy, brought back as Servants, with Arturia and Jeanne Alter, facing Cesar, who because of his words and insults, he's going to earn a beating, courtesy of Saber Alter.
While Shirou, Ritsuka, and Mash, face the other Servant.
And while that's happening in Rome, how are things going with Ophelia and Olga? And by the way, while I'm very pro-Arturia, maybe one of the many fights and confrontations between Jeanne and Arturia Alter, would give Ophelia the chance she needs to get to know Shirou better, maybe with him cooking something for her, which would make Ophelia the envy of the Alters,... and Olga.
Good luck and keep it up
12/16/2022 c22 evilstatistic19
Good chapter looking forward to the next poor saber alter this is not a good time for her
Good chapter looking forward to the next poor saber alter this is not a good time for her
12/16/2022 c22 Sinner and Redeemer
Poor Saber Alter, Shirou better do something good for her after the whole disguise is over. Nudge nudge wink wink? XD
Poor Saber Alter, Shirou better do something good for her after the whole disguise is over. Nudge nudge wink wink? XD
12/16/2022 c22 Ariadne Venegas
I always found that Nero outfit had nothing to do with the times, of the later times also. So it is normal that Arturia and Cesar and even Jeanne react at it as they do.
I really do get the FGO character designers. Did you see Don Quixote? In the books says he was tall and lanky very slim and like 40 to 50 years of age. In characterization is obese as Sancho his servant squire!
The same we could say about Julius Caesar he was very athletic like a runner there are several busts and statues of him and not of them are obese.
I really hate the characterization
Like what they did with the Hindu!
They put all the good people as bad people and viceversa. And Rama…OMG that is horrible. He used an Arch! He was famous for it as his brother. And the sword was really different. The hair, the cloths all different, and he was taller and with more muscle definition.
And Ganesha that was fool! Ganesha is a little boy and then adolescent with a head of and elephant that’s why he is big. He is not obese or eat a lot. Also he is a god!
I always found that Nero outfit had nothing to do with the times, of the later times also. So it is normal that Arturia and Cesar and even Jeanne react at it as they do.
I really do get the FGO character designers. Did you see Don Quixote? In the books says he was tall and lanky very slim and like 40 to 50 years of age. In characterization is obese as Sancho his servant squire!
The same we could say about Julius Caesar he was very athletic like a runner there are several busts and statues of him and not of them are obese.
I really hate the characterization
Like what they did with the Hindu!
They put all the good people as bad people and viceversa. And Rama…OMG that is horrible. He used an Arch! He was famous for it as his brother. And the sword was really different. The hair, the cloths all different, and he was taller and with more muscle definition.
And Ganesha that was fool! Ganesha is a little boy and then adolescent with a head of and elephant that’s why he is big. He is not obese or eat a lot. Also he is a god!
12/16/2022 c22 aldorojas2001
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Gracias gracias gracias gracias gracias gracias gracias gracias gracias gracias por su gran trabajo
12/16/2022 c22 Guest
This is what I'm talking about. Been a while man
This is what I'm talking about. Been a while man
12/16/2022 c1 Pathreader
To growcraft95
Thanks for the compliment, I just thought ‘hey Salter is being recognized as a change of character of Nero by Roman people, and since each servant class of the same person reflects a different facet of their personality/ moment in time, like with Diarmud saber and lancer, or Setanta and Cu, couldn’t this Nero(?) become a new servant?’ Then it just flow from there.
The class pretender is picked because it is when ‘a person pretends to be someone else who then achieves feats than grows beyond original legend’ which fits Salter here to a t. The stat are based on Salter stat in FGO then raise her Agility due to replacing her plate armor with Nero battle dress. Then her profile is written from Parcacious’s description of her actions and symbolism from Roman legionaries pov.
And I do admit that the reason I wrote this is because I want to see Salter flabbergasted staring at her dark history once they return to Chaldea after this singularity and Shirou do a sq summon. And of course to feed the harem since there is no canon saber face alters in this singularity. That would be quite a sight for us reader, no?
To growcraft95
Thanks for the compliment, I just thought ‘hey Salter is being recognized as a change of character of Nero by Roman people, and since each servant class of the same person reflects a different facet of their personality/ moment in time, like with Diarmud saber and lancer, or Setanta and Cu, couldn’t this Nero(?) become a new servant?’ Then it just flow from there.
The class pretender is picked because it is when ‘a person pretends to be someone else who then achieves feats than grows beyond original legend’ which fits Salter here to a t. The stat are based on Salter stat in FGO then raise her Agility due to replacing her plate armor with Nero battle dress. Then her profile is written from Parcacious’s description of her actions and symbolism from Roman legionaries pov.
And I do admit that the reason I wrote this is because I want to see Salter flabbergasted staring at her dark history once they return to Chaldea after this singularity and Shirou do a sq summon. And of course to feed the harem since there is no canon saber face alters in this singularity. That would be quite a sight for us reader, no?