for Fate: Sword Order12/16/2024 c37 
1orion0905
This looks fun, and her Shiro should be able to go without picking up another stray. Best of all he finally gets some bros to hang with. Guy was about to drown in the estrogen chasing him.
1orion0905This looks fun, and her Shiro should be able to go without picking up another stray. Best of all he finally gets some bros to hang with. Guy was about to drown in the estrogen chasing him.
12/16/2024 c37 7Faux Ray
Holy...
I read "Iris's Mist" and I thought, but I knew it couldn't be.
But it is, wow.
7Faux RayHoly...
I read "Iris's Mist" and I thought, but I knew it couldn't be.
But it is, wow.
12/16/2024 c37 Retro2theSecond
A rather... Interesting choice to do a crossover this far into the fic.
Its not bad per say, and Percy Jackson *is* one of the more fitting stories that can easy be welded into Type-Moon stories due to Fate's theme of myth and legends.
But I feel like this is just kinda... shoehorned in? Like, there wasn't really any build up to this. It just happened randomly and immediately just after the last arc ended, and literally too while he was just returning back from a singularity. Idk, its just the way its so suddenly introduced that it doesn't really like, interest me much to the idea of it.
Again, not bad, but, just weird.
A rather... Interesting choice to do a crossover this far into the fic.
Its not bad per say, and Percy Jackson *is* one of the more fitting stories that can easy be welded into Type-Moon stories due to Fate's theme of myth and legends.
But I feel like this is just kinda... shoehorned in? Like, there wasn't really any build up to this. It just happened randomly and immediately just after the last arc ended, and literally too while he was just returning back from a singularity. Idk, its just the way its so suddenly introduced that it doesn't really like, interest me much to the idea of it.
Again, not bad, but, just weird.
12/16/2024 c37 RenegadeDragons
Not really here for other crossovers intruding on this tbh, wanted to see how Shiro handles FGO (and especially since there was no indication prior this was going to suddenly multi cross which takes away from the premise for me) And personally I don’t care for PJO :/
I’d be alright w it if PJO characters don’t suddenly intrude on the rest of the narrative and are only around for this one questline maybe (and are not suddenly summons also) - but if other crossover characters start showing up for the entire story (and as summons) and thus take away from an FGO au with Shiro I’m probably gonna bail personally, I’ll be disappointed but it is your story to do as you please, thank you for all the work you’ve put in so far either way - as I have really enjoyed this story, I always wanted to read a really good FGO but with Shiro fic.
Not really here for other crossovers intruding on this tbh, wanted to see how Shiro handles FGO (and especially since there was no indication prior this was going to suddenly multi cross which takes away from the premise for me) And personally I don’t care for PJO :/
I’d be alright w it if PJO characters don’t suddenly intrude on the rest of the narrative and are only around for this one questline maybe (and are not suddenly summons also) - but if other crossover characters start showing up for the entire story (and as summons) and thus take away from an FGO au with Shiro I’m probably gonna bail personally, I’ll be disappointed but it is your story to do as you please, thank you for all the work you’ve put in so far either way - as I have really enjoyed this story, I always wanted to read a really good FGO but with Shiro fic.
12/16/2024 c37 24MrFoxHoundSir
In future “event” arcs 1 or 2 of Shirou’s servants should be sent with him as they all try to cement themselves as his favorite.
24MrFoxHoundSirIn future “event” arcs 1 or 2 of Shirou’s servants should be sent with him as they all try to cement themselves as his favorite.
12/16/2024 c37 Ariadne Venegas
They must save the camp! IDK where they are in history but they need the heroes of Olympus plus Nico and his boy alive and well!
I hope they can save them.
They must save the camp! IDK where they are in history but they need the heroes of Olympus plus Nico and his boy alive and well!
I hope they can save them.