for Fate: Sword Order10/20/2024 c36 Guest
amazing, keep up the great work
amazing, keep up the great work
10/10/2024 c36 Guest
Honestly one of the more interesting premises for a fate fanfiction. I hope this story continues to completion (or at least a final chapter that shows how the story would finish if you lose interest) because I truly want to see what happens with shirou and saber alter’s relationship and how they impact the cast of grand order in the end.
Honestly one of the more interesting premises for a fate fanfiction. I hope this story continues to completion (or at least a final chapter that shows how the story would finish if you lose interest) because I truly want to see what happens with shirou and saber alter’s relationship and how they impact the cast of grand order in the end.
10/9/2024 c36 
2Inquisition
I find the dynamic of Saber Alter's regret at becoming altered and loss of purity interesting, especially in how she will relate to her Lancer self. Can't wait to get to the Camelot singularity and see you explore this.
Also can't wait to see Parvati and Ishtar, for obvious reasons.
2InquisitionI find the dynamic of Saber Alter's regret at becoming altered and loss of purity interesting, especially in how she will relate to her Lancer self. Can't wait to get to the Camelot singularity and see you explore this.
Also can't wait to see Parvati and Ishtar, for obvious reasons.
10/5/2024 c8 Guest
Figured. The part 1 sucked, so obviously the quality nosedived.
Figured. The part 1 sucked, so obviously the quality nosedived.
10/1/2024 c36 1WeAreTheWord
A double Nero addition to the harem would totally be in character for the Roman sabers XD. Also because they both must be pampered and headpatted for eternity. Ngl do all saber face servants get the bad ends?
1WeAreTheWordA double Nero addition to the harem would totally be in character for the Roman sabers XD. Also because they both must be pampered and headpatted for eternity. Ngl do all saber face servants get the bad ends?
9/26/2024 c4 Guest
Minor grammar mistake at the last line. "Let my sword crush our enemies light." does not flow at all. It could be replaced with "Let my sword crush the light of our enemies." or "Let my sword crush our enemy's light."
Minor grammar mistake at the last line. "Let my sword crush our enemies light." does not flow at all. It could be replaced with "Let my sword crush the light of our enemies." or "Let my sword crush our enemy's light."
9/18/2024 c36 1Kamukura77
Wow, wow, you left me speechless. The fight is somewhat slow in its pace but full of meaning, the outcome, using Excalibur to finish off the beast. I recently played Rome Singularity but I have to say I liked your Singularity much more.
I half expected you to follow the example of the previous ones and Shirou would take Draco or Sodom as a servant. Don't get me wrong, I love Jalter and Salter but I think it was a very good decision to delay summoning Nero for a while, at least until the threats level up (I still hope Shirou manages to summon Draco sooner rather than later XD. And I would love to see Salter and Jalter's jealousy towards her)
I don't speak English so I'm using a translator, so I apologize for the bad spelling.
1Kamukura77Wow, wow, you left me speechless. The fight is somewhat slow in its pace but full of meaning, the outcome, using Excalibur to finish off the beast. I recently played Rome Singularity but I have to say I liked your Singularity much more.
I half expected you to follow the example of the previous ones and Shirou would take Draco or Sodom as a servant. Don't get me wrong, I love Jalter and Salter but I think it was a very good decision to delay summoning Nero for a while, at least until the threats level up (I still hope Shirou manages to summon Draco sooner rather than later XD. And I would love to see Salter and Jalter's jealousy towards her)
I don't speak English so I'm using a translator, so I apologize for the bad spelling.
9/15/2024 c36 E
Harem Protagonist EX is a truly broken skill.
Harem Protagonist EX is a truly broken skill.
9/15/2024 c36 1W8W
So whats was point of summoning this Nero by Shirou? She only caused problems and I dont see any benefits short or long term from her presence.
1W8WSo whats was point of summoning this Nero by Shirou? She only caused problems and I dont see any benefits short or long term from her presence.
9/8/2024 c36 PotassiumBanana
I pity for nero, a great emperor fated to be the worst. So it's good that she will join shirou for I know shirou would give him the love she deserve.
I pity for nero, a great emperor fated to be the worst. So it's good that she will join shirou for I know shirou would give him the love she deserve.