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2/24 c31 Dasgun
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2/24 c30 kusanagi29
Y seguimos avanzando en esta travesia...y parece que las cosas se van a complicar un poco, buen capitulo
2/23 c30 NotLeviathan
Can't nero get a win? It's kinda sad seeing her taking L after L
2/23 c1 MetallicWolf-FN2004
Haha good chapter. Saber and Arthur are still fire and ice, but have a good wall (caliburn) keeping thing ‘cordial’ for now. Everyone is still walking on eggshells regarding Boudica and her hatred for Nero and her Rome despite never truly meeting eachother in life. Nero tryjng to prove herself as a capable leader after Saber Alter outshines her during her time as the false rose, challenging his uncle and trying her best to defeat him. She got some impressive hits on the man despite the man being a Heroic Spirit. Then saber comes in and saves Nero at the last second, which surely won’t be good for her confidence and uses rule breaker to try and free the beserker. Yet it did not work.

My best guess is that Lev somehow saw how archer was able to steal Martha from Jalter in France and he along with the other demon gods made some new failsafes to ensure it never happens again. It’s refreshing that this is being brought up as most people will just moan ‘why didnt you use rulebreaker’ when Shirou is present in the story, good to see that something is there to ensure such a backdoor way doesn’t work.

Good chapter can’t wait for the next one. Sword Order is my favourite made by you. I wanna see more Saber Alter and Jeanne Alter fighting over Shirou, its both cute and funny.
2/23 c30 NTMkensei03
Who care, Fate Sword Order is better anyway, but passive Shirou is getting worse though, he barely a character these last new chapters.
2/22 c30 Guest
Wasn't the next order Hero and Sword? But it become Sword Order instead?
2/21 c30 KnightR1
just a normal day to get Punch and thrown out in the air..
2/21 c30 evilstatistic19
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
2/21 c30 1W8W
Interesting metaphor with magnetic train but I am not sure how Artur and Salter opposites are supposed to be productive.
Nero self confidence being damaged and her desire to prove herself are understandable.
Attempt to use Rule Breaker against servant forced to act with Command Spells is reasonable. I wonder why it did not worked.
2/21 c30 BlueSnake19
Hmmm. Not sure if RB didnt work or if this is just a regular berker gonna berk thing

Looking forward to the next!
2/21 c30 Bucio
While I admit not knowing so much about FGO and I don't feel like doing a wiki dive again, I feel that Lapucelle was faster than Invicta, and in this arc we are literally running in circles (being repetitive)

In the aspect of protecting Nero and all the negative feelings she has due to her doubts, insecurities and poor performance during that crisis, that her grace and charisma do not function as she believes and expected (although I admit it is fun to see her act in her usual Extravagant way of being and her growing interest in Shirou - for the annoyance of Saber and Jeanne Alters)

With this negativity that feeds Draco (about her, by the way, there really was a reason to summon her?, Outside of showing that apparently, Shirou is locked in pure Servants Alters) or if Nero, to the point of the mental collapse because of the Caligula, it could end up allowing Draco to wake up, plus the detail if she would be an ally or not, despite her having been Summoned for Shirou, Draco has not yet recognized him as her master

And our protagonist trying to mediate among all, without much success, and even delay in acting after Nero impulsively running to face his uncle (when the priority is supposed to protect her, the Ally of Justice doubts to go after whom he must take care of/protect?), being only until Arthur shows interest in doing something that everyone acts

Also with Arthur and Saber Alter, taking badly, such as dogs and cats, not agreeing on anything or having things in common (outside of being both gluttons and trusting Caliburn), and such disunion could be expensive given what is at stake; of what we also run risks with the Servant that Ritsuka went to find: Boudica, given her story and resentment towards Nero's Rome for what they did to her family and people

From the end, apparently Rule Breaker not working in Caligula, like Shirou and the others expected, does that strategy really don't work? Or there is another thing at stake, some certain detail that Chaldea and its masters have overlooked or ignore, something that I suppose we will see in the next chapter (that or the arrival of Ritsuka and his group, with Boudica)

Also being of the good in this chapter, with Artoria Alter having to recognize - to her regret - Nero's abilities, since she is able to fight her uncle, despite being a Servant

Good luck and keep it up
2/21 c30 Aliata
This was a nice chapter though it felt like much more of a set up chapter for future events.

I’ve been enjoying neros characterisation and how you’ve handled her i am interested to find out what happens to her in the end.

Well either way this was a nice read and im I treated to see more
2/21 c2 7Ballin' And Can't Get Up
UBW or Stay Night?
Because it's certainly not Heaven's Feel.
2/21 c30 guiltyr2
I bet caligula got confused at another 'Nero' lmao
2/20 c30 3501awezome
Ironic, I just watched the day ebfor ethis wa suploaded First Order after a long time and then a new chapter to this series as after I did so.

i think this could be a good luck ritual. Aight Imma start watching Grand Order movies once a month to get the fortune that this story is going to update mire frequently
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