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Oh my gosh- it's been such a long while since I've read this and it made me giggle at the best parts. I was a bit surprised at the first spanish bit- maybe the second part was wonderfully put.

I did however think Shiro was acting a bit sappy- but that I could get used to. This was a wonderful and well-written piece. You did good! Can't wait to see what else you'll create! XD