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6/25/2020 c3 1Monsieur Mastermind
I'd say M ratings are for excessive gore, words that are *scary* to use in a public setting (N-word) and of course the act of intercourse.
6/25/2020 c3 JudgmentKing
Love this story so far, it really feels like you captured luffy’s personality.
6/25/2020 c3 WhiteyWolf26
HA! This is going to be great! I can already see the topic of either Luffy or Ace's exceptional strength for his age coming up once he's with the Whitebeard's, and Ace's just deadpan and like "Dudes, my littlest brother's three years younger than me and yet I never won in a fight against him!" xD

It's interesting how some things have already changed, even though Luffy didn't outright interfere much where his brothers are concerned.
6/25/2020 c3 TwoLegs
Ooooh this is nice. Especially if there's gonna be canon divergence like in chapter 2! That's what makes time travel fix it fics spicy. Everyone seems in character too, I like it!
6/25/2020 c3 BlueHeartNina
This chapter made me smile
6/24/2020 c2 6Smiley-Nami
This is good. Continue when you can.
6/24/2020 c2 1livinganime14
Ok first, Imma key board smash.

BCKDBDJDBDDKDHOFNSUDMFHOEJSJFNSODHJFNFJFNF

now second, this is heckin’ adorably awesome, and I can’t wait for his meeting with his bros and his crew’s.

You surpass me in writing and have nothing to say about your grammar.
6/24/2020 c2 2Monxu Aki
Good story I'm enjoying it!
6/24/2020 c2 BlueHeartNina
Thank you for the chapter it was rlly great. I love it, and I can’t wait for the next chapter UwU!
6/24/2020 c2 WhiteyWolf26
This story is really good so far, I like it! I'm looking forward to reading more!
6/23/2020 c1 Matt
Nice.
6/23/2020 c1 BlueHeartNina
Great start
6/23/2020 c1 1white-winds hunter
continue this story, i like the writings and hopefully this will be fresh story with new ideas
6/23/2020 c1 1livinganime14
Amazing!

I don’t see any visible mistakes and it looks detailed. Your grammar seems on point for me, but it’s up to you and everyone else to decide.

Can’t wait for your next chapter
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