for I Don't Run An Orphanage!10h c88 lincon01
if it makes you feel any better there was an event in MHA ultra impact that did give her a bit of glory
if it makes you feel any better there was an event in MHA ultra impact that did give her a bit of glory
9/11 c62 lincon01
Gachas i play are MHA ultra impact, shin mgami tensi liberation dx2 and konosuba fantastic days
Gachas i play are MHA ultra impact, shin mgami tensi liberation dx2 and konosuba fantastic days
9/8 c174 AlreadyExistingMe
"And much as hate it, I can take advantage of that. While I can't give the drug out to everyone that needs it, I can give it to a few…useful individuals. People who will be extremely grateful, for my help. Izuku
Looks like our little greenbean is no longer little or greenbean at all. I like how you do Izuku growth in this fic, he's no longer the hero enthusiast boy, right now Izuku is a Man that will and definitely kill anyone dare to touch his children, even if it meant resort to violence and probably Villainous act he will do it.
This words in this chapter proves that he's no saint and will get his hand dirty if he had to, if it means to ensure the future of his household he will do the most hideous thing ever known to mankind, and the fact that Nezu is willing to help is also another worrying factor.
"And much as hate it, I can take advantage of that. While I can't give the drug out to everyone that needs it, I can give it to a few…useful individuals. People who will be extremely grateful, for my help. Izuku
Looks like our little greenbean is no longer little or greenbean at all. I like how you do Izuku growth in this fic, he's no longer the hero enthusiast boy, right now Izuku is a Man that will and definitely kill anyone dare to touch his children, even if it meant resort to violence and probably Villainous act he will do it.
This words in this chapter proves that he's no saint and will get his hand dirty if he had to, if it means to ensure the future of his household he will do the most hideous thing ever known to mankind, and the fact that Nezu is willing to help is also another worrying factor.
9/5 c101 Guest
I know you said Yonda isn't villainous at all, but can you let me think she is? Because while the main contexts and goal for D.O.C is to reformed OP children into future heroes it's definitely a treat for me for thinking 'Why not have a villainous child?' It also makes the fact she's smart.
You did said her Intellect is in the level of Uraraka, but the fact that she thought of all the possible scenarios, all of the plan and all of the ways of countering the whole conversation. Make me think 'is she really just playing smart?' I get it you wrote her to be like that, but it make me felt (smirk, smirk).
I also like the thought of a group of Izuku's children actually act like a villain while maintaining an innocent mask just for the purpose of protecting him and keeping their perfect family safe. It just make me fell giddy.
Like your story tho! Still couldn't help but think... What kind of mad determination keep you still writing this? Like, I found your fic in 2021 literally 3 years ago! And yet you still keep writing this fic. Is insane.
I know you said Yonda isn't villainous at all, but can you let me think she is? Because while the main contexts and goal for D.O.C is to reformed OP children into future heroes it's definitely a treat for me for thinking 'Why not have a villainous child?' It also makes the fact she's smart.
You did said her Intellect is in the level of Uraraka, but the fact that she thought of all the possible scenarios, all of the plan and all of the ways of countering the whole conversation. Make me think 'is she really just playing smart?' I get it you wrote her to be like that, but it make me felt (smirk, smirk).
I also like the thought of a group of Izuku's children actually act like a villain while maintaining an innocent mask just for the purpose of protecting him and keeping their perfect family safe. It just make me fell giddy.
Like your story tho! Still couldn't help but think... What kind of mad determination keep you still writing this? Like, I found your fic in 2021 literally 3 years ago! And yet you still keep writing this fic. Is insane.
9/7 c147 AlreadyExistingMe
Yonda to Mineta be like:
"Would you kindly obey."
You said Yonda intellect is the same level as Ochacho, I don't think Ochacho would be able to pull of this act, she's way smarter than the credit you give her for.
'Acting smart' my ass! She's literally manipulating the odds to her desired end! I get it she can do allat thanks to her quirks, but the fact that means she knows someone deepest secret and is not afraid to use it as a blackmail material said otherwise!
Anyway, thank you for this amazing fic.
Yonda to Mineta be like:
"Would you kindly obey."
You said Yonda intellect is the same level as Ochacho, I don't think Ochacho would be able to pull of this act, she's way smarter than the credit you give her for.
'Acting smart' my ass! She's literally manipulating the odds to her desired end! I get it she can do allat thanks to her quirks, but the fact that means she knows someone deepest secret and is not afraid to use it as a blackmail material said otherwise!
Anyway, thank you for this amazing fic.
9/6 c1 
13Ganheim
"Quite. We're lucky that the kid's asleep
I think that should be quiet, given the context.
Eri refused to leave his side. Saying that she didn't have any parents. So they just left her with him
At this point suspension of disbelief breaks. Yes, Izuku is there but there’s a whole legal structure and both he and her are minors who aren’t trusted to sign contracts much less make decisions in place of a parent. With his mother gone, Izuku has no adult caretaker and even he’d be taken and put into their social services’ custody.
"Your right young Eri!"
You’re
Interesting story, the only real problem I had was that middle note about them being minors. I'll have to read more but I'd think there has to be some adult grounding figure in Izuku's life which would at a minimum okay the addition of Eri to the household. That's a big deal, especially in Japan given its culture and laws around fostering and the great lengths they will go to track down distant cousins rather than house someone with non-relatives.
13Ganheim"Quite. We're lucky that the kid's asleep
I think that should be quiet, given the context.
Eri refused to leave his side. Saying that she didn't have any parents. So they just left her with him
At this point suspension of disbelief breaks. Yes, Izuku is there but there’s a whole legal structure and both he and her are minors who aren’t trusted to sign contracts much less make decisions in place of a parent. With his mother gone, Izuku has no adult caretaker and even he’d be taken and put into their social services’ custody.
"Your right young Eri!"
You’re
Interesting story, the only real problem I had was that middle note about them being minors. I'll have to read more but I'd think there has to be some adult grounding figure in Izuku's life which would at a minimum okay the addition of Eri to the household. That's a big deal, especially in Japan given its culture and laws around fostering and the great lengths they will go to track down distant cousins rather than house someone with non-relatives.
9/6 c318 Biggal
Kyodon
Thx 4 the chapter I hope fuhai gets better soon and it looks like the twins give me a breakthrough and enhancing and getting better control over their transformation quirks
Kyodon
Thx 4 the chapter I hope fuhai gets better soon and it looks like the twins give me a breakthrough and enhancing and getting better control over their transformation quirks
9/5 c318 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Cool chapter. Reminds me of Spiderman 2, when Peter started losing his powers due to psychosomatic block.
Keep the good writing.
50acosta perez jose ramiroCool chapter. Reminds me of Spiderman 2, when Peter started losing his powers due to psychosomatic block.
Keep the good writing.
9/5 c318 6Joanne Frances Tiano Cajilig
I didn't know that was a thing but I saw it from the manga black jack, a female actress got into a terrible accident. Even with the surgery, she believes she couldn't move at all. It took almost getting mauled by a cat, her body reacted. She can move a do her job but... I don't want to tell you what happened next, thank you for the update. I'll patiently wait for the next, now... Pls, pls, pls include Zenless Zone Zero in this story pls!
6Joanne Frances Tiano CajiligI didn't know that was a thing but I saw it from the manga black jack, a female actress got into a terrible accident. Even with the surgery, she believes she couldn't move at all. It took almost getting mauled by a cat, her body reacted. She can move a do her job but... I don't want to tell you what happened next, thank you for the update. I'll patiently wait for the next, now... Pls, pls, pls include Zenless Zone Zero in this story pls!