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6/28/2020 c1 64Sophia the Scribe
Such good imagery, here! "Righteous commander", "the Judge and the Stone", "intertwined brilliance"-really evocative phrases. Our hero kings who died together...even, I dare say, "side-to-side and back-to-back, each the other's shield"?
VDMA,
Sophia
6/27/2020 c1 4SouthwestExpat
There is so much emotion packed into this short poem. The horribleness of death, the rest it means to those who are His. The pain of those left behind, the comfort of those who died together. Horrible, horrible griefbut not despair, not quite... there is a glimpse, just enough of the comfort and the joy that has no end.
6/27/2020 c1 17Pacifia
That was just...beautiful.
It was so short yet so long. They did die together. Even if Lucy died too in the crash, they were each other until the last moment.
I just...I can't...
*Runs and hides and dark room to cry*

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