for Peerless Darkness10/29/2022 c67 JaimonDosFendu
While good, this arc is dragging on indeed.
It just feels like it could have been any other lambda protagonist who would have led this and we'd get the same journey and ending. Like a filler episode
Thanks for writing anyway!
While good, this arc is dragging on indeed.
It just feels like it could have been any other lambda protagonist who would have led this and we'd get the same journey and ending. Like a filler episode
Thanks for writing anyway!
10/29/2022 c67 
3coldblue2015
Interesting...
A few more Arc's and wrapping up of business in this story.
SI/Danzo/Kojiro:
Interesting to read the drama happening. The Mad/God-like Priest broke the Sword and Reibi was trying to absorb that Charka, before SI/Danzo/Kojiro came to stop it with Musashi as his partner...A mindscape battle happen where SI or John deals with his persona as Danzo and having dialogue of SI/Danzo on how to bring Peace to the world. Danzo wanted to take control and cut all the would be enemies down, while bringing peace...SI/Dano/Kojiro just label him a Dictator and was too radical of change to happen at the current moment. SI/Danzo/Kojiro created Heaven Slash and broke out of his mindscape to stop the Reibi. The Reibi died, but something or someone new came out...Shirone-no-Genryu or the Dragon of Light in a humanoid/female form. It is interesting how SI/Danzo/Kojiro will deal with this new change and move on from there with Nashiro, Musashi and Mifune back to the Leaf.
Questions
1) Can we expect SI/Danzo/Kojiro to be changing and shifting the Great Shinobi War's to come by being infamous General or being great at Assassinations of certain leaders/political heads?
2) Are we going to read Epilogue with SI/Danzo just being Old-Man Danzo, but with large family and growing business with enormous influence at the end or beginning of "Naruto" cannon?
3) Will we get your Yakuza base stories coming next soon with "Peerless Darkness" completed?
Suggestions
1) I figure as General or being leader of Root, but doing right and not thinking everyone so disposable tool to use. I kind of read SI/Danzo just being more successful as Root Leader, but I can read being infamous as War-time General could work as well. Kind of like SI/Danzo earns that title surviving/thriving in 3 Shinobi War as...the Peerless Darkness of the Shinobi World.
2) Kind of want to read that. How many kids SI/Danzo had and how many Grandkids he has. Not to mention how well his Agriculture/Business venture is doing creating Supermarkets and being all around the Elemental Nations. The Political influence is huge given SI/Danzo marriage's/wives of his Clan and season/respect as successful Shinobi with a High Rank. Most likely, SI/Danzo is pleasant and more cool-headed advisor to Hokage's he meet whom take on the mantel.
3) I kind of look forward to those Stories. I want to read them. One where your character from Italy connected to Mob family before going to Japan and ending up connected/in a Yakuza organization. Not to mention the other has you born into a Yakuza clan that has power, but miss uses and changes the direction so to speak. Whatever it is, I look forward to reading those stories
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3coldblue2015Interesting...
A few more Arc's and wrapping up of business in this story.
SI/Danzo/Kojiro:
Interesting to read the drama happening. The Mad/God-like Priest broke the Sword and Reibi was trying to absorb that Charka, before SI/Danzo/Kojiro came to stop it with Musashi as his partner...A mindscape battle happen where SI or John deals with his persona as Danzo and having dialogue of SI/Danzo on how to bring Peace to the world. Danzo wanted to take control and cut all the would be enemies down, while bringing peace...SI/Dano/Kojiro just label him a Dictator and was too radical of change to happen at the current moment. SI/Danzo/Kojiro created Heaven Slash and broke out of his mindscape to stop the Reibi. The Reibi died, but something or someone new came out...Shirone-no-Genryu or the Dragon of Light in a humanoid/female form. It is interesting how SI/Danzo/Kojiro will deal with this new change and move on from there with Nashiro, Musashi and Mifune back to the Leaf.
Questions
1) Can we expect SI/Danzo/Kojiro to be changing and shifting the Great Shinobi War's to come by being infamous General or being great at Assassinations of certain leaders/political heads?
2) Are we going to read Epilogue with SI/Danzo just being Old-Man Danzo, but with large family and growing business with enormous influence at the end or beginning of "Naruto" cannon?
3) Will we get your Yakuza base stories coming next soon with "Peerless Darkness" completed?
Suggestions
1) I figure as General or being leader of Root, but doing right and not thinking everyone so disposable tool to use. I kind of read SI/Danzo just being more successful as Root Leader, but I can read being infamous as War-time General could work as well. Kind of like SI/Danzo earns that title surviving/thriving in 3 Shinobi War as...the Peerless Darkness of the Shinobi World.
2) Kind of want to read that. How many kids SI/Danzo had and how many Grandkids he has. Not to mention how well his Agriculture/Business venture is doing creating Supermarkets and being all around the Elemental Nations. The Political influence is huge given SI/Danzo marriage's/wives of his Clan and season/respect as successful Shinobi with a High Rank. Most likely, SI/Danzo is pleasant and more cool-headed advisor to Hokage's he meet whom take on the mantel.
3) I kind of look forward to those Stories. I want to read them. One where your character from Italy connected to Mob family before going to Japan and ending up connected/in a Yakuza organization. Not to mention the other has you born into a Yakuza clan that has power, but miss uses and changes the direction so to speak. Whatever it is, I look forward to reading those stories
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
10/15/2022 c66 Kratis40k
Wow, this is sooo good
Wow, this is sooo good