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12Sultan Asil Arslan-Hiatus
Ok now I am interested. A possible Oni. A crossover character or a full OC? And Muramasa… lots of potential this chapter has.
12Sultan Asil Arslan-HiatusOk now I am interested. A possible Oni. A crossover character or a full OC? And Muramasa… lots of potential this chapter has.
6/1/2022 c55 guest
sasaki kojiro. the man. the myth. the regend.
Though,remember just one thing.
His epic won't be completed till he solo a (bigger swallow) dragon
sasaki kojiro. the man. the myth. the regend.
Though,remember just one thing.
His epic won't be completed till he solo a (bigger swallow) dragon
6/1/2022 c55 1aperson1234567890
Gah! I've caught up! Curses! Ah well, can't be helped. I've really enjoyed the story and the only real critiques I have are minor like the rare typo. The largest one being that you occasionally seem a bit strange with the timeskips and Danzo's age. You occasionally seem to have his age jump around a bit forward and back. I recall early in the story he was stated to be 8 or 9 but I believe you at one point said he was only 7 which was a bit odd. Aside from that the story is great and I look forward to more!
1aperson1234567890Gah! I've caught up! Curses! Ah well, can't be helped. I've really enjoyed the story and the only real critiques I have are minor like the rare typo. The largest one being that you occasionally seem a bit strange with the timeskips and Danzo's age. You occasionally seem to have his age jump around a bit forward and back. I recall early in the story he was stated to be 8 or 9 but I believe you at one point said he was only 7 which was a bit odd. Aside from that the story is great and I look forward to more!
6/1/2022 c50 aperson1234567890
Eldritch beings are hard to write as actually being eldritch. After all, how could someone describe a being literally beyond human comprehension. I have to say I think you did a pretty good job considering that. I always find it funny that in any fic that includes something from that mythos I have yet to see one that under sells the power of those entities. You really sold an "Oh...svibe when Danzo figured out what he was dealing with. Lastly, just wanted to say I'm enjoying the story!
Eldritch beings are hard to write as actually being eldritch. After all, how could someone describe a being literally beyond human comprehension. I have to say I think you did a pretty good job considering that. I always find it funny that in any fic that includes something from that mythos I have yet to see one that under sells the power of those entities. You really sold an "Oh...svibe when Danzo figured out what he was dealing with. Lastly, just wanted to say I'm enjoying the story!
6/1/2022 c42 aperson1234567890
I had thought that character was a reference to a certain shark. Confirmation got a good chuckle out of me. And the Mirai Arc shorts seem like they will be quite the laugh.
I had thought that character was a reference to a certain shark. Confirmation got a good chuckle out of me. And the Mirai Arc shorts seem like they will be quite the laugh.
5/29/2022 c28 aperson1234567890
He was inspired by something Bizzare when making puppets eh? Ah references.
He was inspired by something Bizzare when making puppets eh? Ah references.
5/29/2022 c55 Guest
Okay I have got to ask this but I'm okay with this being revealed in story but what will Kojiro's sword be called? Or will the sword get a name of it's own by Kojiro overhearing stories of his deeds in the land of iron? As for this new generation of samurai I look forward to how Kojiro's story will affect them growing up but right now I'm more interested in the current and older generation of samurai.
How will Kojiro challenge these samurai and in so doing how will he change them and who will he meet along the way? I know people a calling for Kojiro to fight the Naruto universe equivalent of Miyamoto Musashi but there are more combatants then just him, heck you have a plethora of anime, video game swords-men and swords-women to choose from. True you can also construct various original characters which is all fine by me but I wanted to just point out other options cause fuck it why not.
Anyway I look forward to the continued legend of Saski Kojiro and how he will kick ass and take names all across the land of Iron before either faking his death or just vanishing from the face of the earth only to pop up here and there from time to time. But whatever happens to this identity Danzo has constructed himself I hope that the friends and rivals he makes show up again in the story when he decided's its time to but Kojiro on the bench for a bit.
P.S
I absolutely love the idea of Danzo constructing a new identity as Sasaki Kojiro and my other question is "will he make more new identities" Cause I can just see multiple legends of different great warriors, healers, merchants, whatever role he decides to take on and all of them are just Danzo in disguise being so cool. You can just imagine the seen of a group of fans in front of a string board connecting all of the little pieces and the last one clicks into place and all of them being absolutely mind blown crying out "NO WAY!" at the top of there lungs having finally cracked the mystery.
Sorry about the tangent but that image was just bouncing around in my head demanding to be shared all that aside see everyone in the next chapter.
Okay I have got to ask this but I'm okay with this being revealed in story but what will Kojiro's sword be called? Or will the sword get a name of it's own by Kojiro overhearing stories of his deeds in the land of iron? As for this new generation of samurai I look forward to how Kojiro's story will affect them growing up but right now I'm more interested in the current and older generation of samurai.
How will Kojiro challenge these samurai and in so doing how will he change them and who will he meet along the way? I know people a calling for Kojiro to fight the Naruto universe equivalent of Miyamoto Musashi but there are more combatants then just him, heck you have a plethora of anime, video game swords-men and swords-women to choose from. True you can also construct various original characters which is all fine by me but I wanted to just point out other options cause fuck it why not.
Anyway I look forward to the continued legend of Saski Kojiro and how he will kick ass and take names all across the land of Iron before either faking his death or just vanishing from the face of the earth only to pop up here and there from time to time. But whatever happens to this identity Danzo has constructed himself I hope that the friends and rivals he makes show up again in the story when he decided's its time to but Kojiro on the bench for a bit.
P.S
I absolutely love the idea of Danzo constructing a new identity as Sasaki Kojiro and my other question is "will he make more new identities" Cause I can just see multiple legends of different great warriors, healers, merchants, whatever role he decides to take on and all of them are just Danzo in disguise being so cool. You can just imagine the seen of a group of fans in front of a string board connecting all of the little pieces and the last one clicks into place and all of them being absolutely mind blown crying out "NO WAY!" at the top of there lungs having finally cracked the mystery.
Sorry about the tangent but that image was just bouncing around in my head demanding to be shared all that aside see everyone in the next chapter.
5/27/2022 c54 Guest
What if Danzo's seal on his mother works a little too well? like instead of just one kid being born it's twins or triplets, oh boy Madara is going to love and hate Danzo so much if that happens. After all I'm sure being woken up at three in the morning by three screaming newborns isn't irritating at all and he will not blame Danzo in the least... okay maybe he will kick his ass when he gets home a "fair" bit heavy emphasis on that fair by the by.
What if Danzo's seal on his mother works a little too well? like instead of just one kid being born it's twins or triplets, oh boy Madara is going to love and hate Danzo so much if that happens. After all I'm sure being woken up at three in the morning by three screaming newborns isn't irritating at all and he will not blame Danzo in the least... okay maybe he will kick his ass when he gets home a "fair" bit heavy emphasis on that fair by the by.
5/28/2022 c55 DarkBan
Huh, so he plans on improving Konoha's tech with that of the floating temple?
Interesting segway xD
Huh, so he plans on improving Konoha's tech with that of the floating temple?
Interesting segway xD
5/28/2022 c55 danielsnow
any chance he could get a samurai girl? I'm not one for really large harems, but I feel like a warrior girl would be good for him. Someone without the Shinobi mindset, and a nicely tanned six pack warrior girl just sounds like an awesome fit.
any chance he could get a samurai girl? I'm not one for really large harems, but I feel like a warrior girl would be good for him. Someone without the Shinobi mindset, and a nicely tanned six pack warrior girl just sounds like an awesome fit.