
11/18/2020 c2 Star-Vader Chaos Breaker
Good to see you will be adding The Royal story content in this fanfic because it was a great improvement to the original story
Good to see you will be adding The Royal story content in this fanfic because it was a great improvement to the original story
8/9/2020 c1 Mr. Haziq
What's the backstory between Makoto and Chidori? Were they in a love triangle with Junpei?
What's the backstory between Makoto and Chidori? Were they in a love triangle with Junpei?
7/21/2020 c2 yoshizawakasumi365
Damn, that sucks that your laptop is broken. Welp, that means I have to be more patient!
Damn, that sucks that your laptop is broken. Welp, that means I have to be more patient!
7/15/2020 c1 Guest
BABYBABYBABYBABYBABYBABY YEAAAAAHHHH...
Makoto Yuki came to replace the inferior protagonist in P5
BABYBABYBABYBABYBABYBABY YEAAAAAHHHH...
Makoto Yuki came to replace the inferior protagonist in P5
7/17/2020 c2 Perseus Ruby Sendou
Good chapter, can't wait for more. I definetly want to know how Lavenza escape from the false god and acquire the help of Messiah.
Good chapter, can't wait for more. I definetly want to know how Lavenza escape from the false god and acquire the help of Messiah.
7/16/2020 c2
6Blue Cipher
Despite of not having a laptop and merely using a phone to write, this is actually not bad. It was nice of Kamoshida knowing his place, Makoto would rip him a new one.
By the way, is this a harem? If so, it would be nice if he could get Sadayo and Sae in this story. I mean, this is technically his past and won't affect the present or the current timeline of Garden's Universe.

Despite of not having a laptop and merely using a phone to write, this is actually not bad. It was nice of Kamoshida knowing his place, Makoto would rip him a new one.
By the way, is this a harem? If so, it would be nice if he could get Sadayo and Sae in this story. I mean, this is technically his past and won't affect the present or the current timeline of Garden's Universe.
7/12/2020 c1 Blue Cipher
This is quite interesting. I could only imagine the eccentricities that Makoto(our boi Messiah) would bring into Shujin and the lives of everyone. This is nice for an introduction so keep it up.
This is quite interesting. I could only imagine the eccentricities that Makoto(our boi Messiah) would bring into Shujin and the lives of everyone. This is nice for an introduction so keep it up.