for Deeds, not Words (SI)4/11 c28 Hoosthat
This amounted to nothing. Literally nothing of significance occurred. What’s the point?
This amounted to nothing. Literally nothing of significance occurred. What’s the point?
4/9 c27 Geek-God of Speed
But baratheon troops were deployed, they were just deployed by the dumb brother
But baratheon troops were deployed, they were just deployed by the dumb brother
3/3 c22 
10rigami
I am in the middle of reading the story. I am truly enjoying it, even if it is sad it seems to be abandoned.
Among all the compliments this story deserve, there is one glaring hole in this chapter: if the whole point of everything is to keep the will and the baratheon heir safe, why not packing them both on a ship and send them to Tarth? At least, a couple lines could be added to explain why. Like, agitated sea the day the lordling arrived and a single, maybe 2 Buckler warships at large the day after to prevent any sea travel, but not enought to prevent the Tarth reinforcements from arriving.
10rigamiI am in the middle of reading the story. I am truly enjoying it, even if it is sad it seems to be abandoned.
Among all the compliments this story deserve, there is one glaring hole in this chapter: if the whole point of everything is to keep the will and the baratheon heir safe, why not packing them both on a ship and send them to Tarth? At least, a couple lines could be added to explain why. Like, agitated sea the day the lordling arrived and a single, maybe 2 Buckler warships at large the day after to prevent any sea travel, but not enought to prevent the Tarth reinforcements from arriving.
12/27/2024 c29 IamGai
When new update?
When new update?
12/12/2024 c24 mattias.akerlund.71
I call hax lol... Considering the speed they marched with, siege equipment would not have managed to keep pace... It is usually built on the spot, and takes more than a mere couple of hours to build lol...
I call hax lol... Considering the speed they marched with, siege equipment would not have managed to keep pace... It is usually built on the spot, and takes more than a mere couple of hours to build lol...
11/23/2024 c24 Jerry
What, Borys somehow find the time to build rams and drag it to Eastwood despite on tight timetable and breach a castle gate in a few hours?
This MC is so pants-on-head stupid I almost wish he lose. Losing a castle in a night? Lmao. That should make it into his epithet. "One night Aelon" lol.
What, Borys somehow find the time to build rams and drag it to Eastwood despite on tight timetable and breach a castle gate in a few hours?
This MC is so pants-on-head stupid I almost wish he lose. Losing a castle in a night? Lmao. That should make it into his epithet. "One night Aelon" lol.
11/4/2024 c29 Guest
One of the most well written stories out of any fandom on this site. Praying i see an update at some point.
One of the most well written stories out of any fandom on this site. Praying i see an update at some point.