for Louise Summons the Dragon of the West3/7 c9 Guest
I like the joke about her setting something on fire at the end it’s hilarious. The fight scene was great too.
I like the joke about her setting something on fire at the end it’s hilarious. The fight scene was great too.
2/12 c9 Sophiamay
Your writing is absolutely captivating, and your story left a strong impression on me. I truly believe it has amazing potential as a comic, and I’d love to explore the idea of bringing it to life. As a commission-based digital artist with experience in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you. Feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90).
Your writing is absolutely captivating, and your story left a strong impression on me. I truly believe it has amazing potential as a comic, and I’d love to explore the idea of bringing it to life. As a commission-based digital artist with experience in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you. Feel free to reach out to me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90).
1/22 c9 Guest
It’s been nice
It’s been nice
12/25/2024 c9 SombraZorro70
Man, this chapter is full of action-packed moments, and, not to mention, everyone pulled their efforts! Honestly, I don't think there's any author who put Guiche and Siesta in screentime! Huh, I was wondering how long we're going to see jacked Iroh again. Anyway, Feliz Navidad and Happy New Year, RainEStar3!
Man, this chapter is full of action-packed moments, and, not to mention, everyone pulled their efforts! Honestly, I don't think there's any author who put Guiche and Siesta in screentime! Huh, I was wondering how long we're going to see jacked Iroh again. Anyway, Feliz Navidad and Happy New Year, RainEStar3!
12/24/2024 c9 
5Backpack Bandit
Genuinely excellent action scene, letting everyone have their moment to shine and showing their progress. Wonderfully done, wonderfully done.
5Backpack BanditGenuinely excellent action scene, letting everyone have their moment to shine and showing their progress. Wonderfully done, wonderfully done.
12/24/2024 c9 guest
Good chapter, but you know as far as I remember Fouquet couldn't crack the wall, in fact it didn't hurt him, it wasn't until Louis launched his explosion that the wall cracked and Fouquet was able to break it.
Good chapter, but you know as far as I remember Fouquet couldn't crack the wall, in fact it didn't hurt him, it wasn't until Louis launched his explosion that the wall cracked and Fouquet was able to break it.
12/24/2024 c9 Dreamweaver Mirar
Thanks for the chapter and Merry Christmas!
Fouquet sure was a decent challenge for the team.
And of course Iroh recognizes an attractive woman even in disguise lol. Nice to (hopefully) skip the chase scene.
Edit suggestions:
he commentated calmly - he commented calmly
Did you think of me a fool? - Do you think me a fool?
Since when you could use magic? - Since when could you use magic?
through her off balance. - throw her off balance.
Thanks for the chapter and Merry Christmas!
Fouquet sure was a decent challenge for the team.
And of course Iroh recognizes an attractive woman even in disguise lol. Nice to (hopefully) skip the chase scene.
Edit suggestions:
he commentated calmly - he commented calmly
Did you think of me a fool? - Do you think me a fool?
Since when you could use magic? - Since when could you use magic?
through her off balance. - throw her off balance.