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9/14/2020 c22 9Nymph of Faeryland
Hey, Alex.
I reviewed like you asked.
This is good. I know I wouldn’t be able to write something like this and it’s nice that you can.
9/10/2020 c4 devildogg237
Man, there’s just something off about your writing. I guess it’s the constant first person style, plus the poor style of paragraphs. You improved from the script style, but maybe have someone go over the story again to help it end up better
9/3/2020 c19 Summersdapple
5 bucks that Marion is going to end up with Percy and Robin with Annabeth. Keep going, dude. The plot is pretty interesting.
7/27/2020 c8 Kymopolea Wave
children of ARTEMIS!... that was totally UNEXPECTED. who knew that the goddess of MAIDENHOOD would have children. are you gonna make them brain child like Athena's or she is going to lose her title and hunt?
please , go on with this story
7/5/2020 c2 samanthajunsayao
Good start hope we'll get longer chapters in the future though, other than that nice story one of the only stories I've read that gives Artemis twins. Keep up the good work.
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