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7/8/2020 c7 Lovetoreadff
Honestly, I think this has the wrong title. I mean, yes you repeatedly reminded us that smile (Lucy, Natsu) is important to the progression of the plot, but that ending was all sizzle (maybe a thirst trap), and I am quite thirsty for more!
With this being the last chapter, I am not sure what would be my favourite, they were all quite different and it’s hard to just pick one that was good. They were all well written. I did quite enjoy the first one though. I liked how it was written and the subject matter. I think that you did a good job with it. Congrats on finishing another NaLu week!
7/8/2020 c6 Lovetoreadff
I am going to disagree with you about this one. I really liked this story. It does feel more like a beginning of a longer story then just a snippet (I want to see more of their earlier and later interactions) maybe even a reveal that Lucy’s celestial magic is somehow involved in the barrier formation or whatever. I liked the dark setting and the tough Lucy. The timing was done well and her inner monologue reminded me of any film noire. It was good. Thank you for sharing it. Can’t wait to see the next one.
7/8/2020 c7 Vanilla Wish
I'm glad I decided to read this one. I actually almost noped out at the beginning after seeing that description of Natsu. I'm not criticizing you or anything, but it's just you see that kind of cliche premise in a summary and it makes you (well, me at least) want to run for the hills, ya know?

Lucy was quick and put on quite the little show. I'm glad she and Natsu hit it off so well. I'm sure he's not used to meeting such genuine people given his level of fame.
I am a bit disappointed we didn't get to see Gajeel kick some ass.
7/8/2020 c7 valerioux
I liked seeing Lucy show how clever she can be in this story.

As for my favorite I would have to say maybe regret cuz I liked how they acted with each other and the whole mafia vibe
7/8/2020 c7 Star
loved them all! It would be hard to pick just one
7/8/2020 c4 26xSteleAliniax
Natsu is a TA?! Sign me up for that class!
Poor Natsu, he just wants Lucy to loooove him! Gotta get her drunk so she’ll be honest and say you’re cute. We all know Natsu is a hottie, don’t be stubborn Luce!
“He thinks she might be the only thing he’ll ever believe in.” AWWWWWWW
OH KNOW SHE DITCHED HIM! Such sadness.
Aww yay, they got back together in the end. Such a cute way to end that for sure. Really liked this one. You’re getting betted and better with your writing.
Can’t wait to see what else is in store.
7/8/2020 c3 xSteleAliniax
A Zoom meeting, oh god haha. To hell with ZOOM.
But dang. Such an interesting concept for a story. You keep surprising me. Super cute story, very light and fun.
7/8/2020 c6 3BrokenAngelWings22
I’m truly loving everything! My gamer heart leapt for joy at the Skyrim reference! I’m so happy that you are participating in this year’s nalu week. Always a pleasure and a joy to read your work! <3
7/7/2020 c6 stranger1999
Damn i absolutely love this AU!The modern/magic setting is extremely intriguing!You really nailed it with the detectivemystery vibe here. This would definitely make a good long story!
i can see why Lucy would get mad at Natsu and im glad they made up and will stand together against Zeref!
7/7/2020 c6 20ShanaHollows
OH. MY. GAWD.

i forgive you for not posting yesterday.

THIS needs to be a full story. PLEASE. The whole atmosphere with the rain and how desolate Lucy feels with the endless battle she's waging sucks you right in. I imagine she WOULD think Natsu a coward for abandoning the scene...but now he's ready to make his stand with Lucy by his side.

LOVE LOVE LOVE

Please make this your next long story...you know you want to!

P.S. Sorry about the late review. Kids had things to do tonight and guess who's the chauffeur.

P.P.S. Did I mention this story rocks? I think it's a contender for the fave.
7/7/2020 c6 1Lodemai04
Oh please make this one a full story!
7/7/2020 c6 valerioux
I think the world you created in this one shot is intriguing. I like the detective type of vibe it gives but still with magic involve. I say you did a good job
7/7/2020 c2 26xSteleAliniax
Whoa Natsu got the drop on Lucy getting the drop on Natsu! Didn’t see that one coming. I love when people make Natsu out to be smarter than he actually is. I don’t know why but I feel like it’s totally NATSU to put on this front of being a complete idiot only to surprise you by being one of the baddest geniuses ever. LOVE.
Natu’s over here like “date me because I wanna get laid” hahaha. I see through you boi.
Another dark scene but I LOVE so much. Very impressive indeed. Love the new writing style you've fallen into. I can still see MorriganFae in there for sure but now it’s even better. Keep up the good work and I tim next time, my friend.
—Stele
7/7/2020 c5 19Professor of Gallifrey
I loved and adored everything about this! Especially Cana. Sober-20 was a comment that I never knew I needed haha!

This was hilarious, captured quarantine perfectly, and gave me a wonderful dose of citrus. Well done! You wrote everyone perfectly!
7/7/2020 c2 Katnibal94
Ch1 is beautifully poetic and ch 2 makes me want to watch it as a movie i want to read more of it! great work! can't wait to read the other chapters.
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