for Nalu Week 20207/2/2020 c2 valerioux
Of course Natsu would surprise her and already know who she was well what she was :)
Of course Natsu would surprise her and already know who she was well what she was :)
7/2/2020 c2 stranger1999
i loved this.
With Natsu being absolutely smitten with Lucy and flirting with her and wanting to date her despite their situation has me soft. i absolutely loved the casual banter they has going on!
(also i had to hold in a snort at Erza being one of the only things that Jellas a fan of)
on another note Thor: Ragnarok is one of my favourite marvel movies as well!(the previous two thor movies just can't compare)
i loved this.
With Natsu being absolutely smitten with Lucy and flirting with her and wanting to date her despite their situation has me soft. i absolutely loved the casual banter they has going on!
(also i had to hold in a snort at Erza being one of the only things that Jellas a fan of)
on another note Thor: Ragnarok is one of my favourite marvel movies as well!(the previous two thor movies just can't compare)
7/2/2020 c1 stranger1999
oh damn this was so different and so brilliant at the same time!I had a hunch that Natsu was trapped somewhere but to think it had to do with Zeref all this time.
I loved how he kept getting glimpses of Lucy and how she had the exact time he was in the void down to hours!
This was heart wrenching! Can't wait for what you have in store for us for the other prompts!
oh damn this was so different and so brilliant at the same time!I had a hunch that Natsu was trapped somewhere but to think it had to do with Zeref all this time.
I loved how he kept getting glimpses of Lucy and how she had the exact time he was in the void down to hours!
This was heart wrenching! Can't wait for what you have in store for us for the other prompts!
7/1/2020 c1 
19Professor of Gallifrey
I knew when I saw the Doctor Who quote that this story would be epic and I was not disappointed in the least! I LOVED it! At first I was a little confused and didn't know what was going on, but then it all got explained and I had that "OH THAT'S WHAT HAPPENED!" moment and I must thank you for that.
Still, my heart is sobbing because Lucy went almost four years without Natsu! The feels! I can't wait to read tomorrow's chapter!
19Professor of GallifreyI knew when I saw the Doctor Who quote that this story would be epic and I was not disappointed in the least! I LOVED it! At first I was a little confused and didn't know what was going on, but then it all got explained and I had that "OH THAT'S WHAT HAPPENED!" moment and I must thank you for that.
Still, my heart is sobbing because Lucy went almost four years without Natsu! The feels! I can't wait to read tomorrow's chapter!
7/1/2020 c1 JAKEDSNAKE
What do you think of me Morrigan? How could you say that i would not like this? This was literally out of this world. Literally. I love how you just compared all the events to out-of-space-like events. It was brilliant and beautiful. I saw it all. And you think you sneaky sneaky putting in that little very tiny hint of ze citrus in the story. I was so happy that he woke up though, but 4 years? Damn that was a long time. Figures Lucy would have it down to the minutes. The best part is that he was able to come out because of her. And i was surprised Zeref let him out. Also that part was pretty damn good as well. Plus Natsu even said that he didnt hate the void. This is all too good. You did a fantabulous job (i just made that word up cause no existing word can properly describe how awesome this is) I cannot wait for more!
What do you think of me Morrigan? How could you say that i would not like this? This was literally out of this world. Literally. I love how you just compared all the events to out-of-space-like events. It was brilliant and beautiful. I saw it all. And you think you sneaky sneaky putting in that little very tiny hint of ze citrus in the story. I was so happy that he woke up though, but 4 years? Damn that was a long time. Figures Lucy would have it down to the minutes. The best part is that he was able to come out because of her. And i was surprised Zeref let him out. Also that part was pretty damn good as well. Plus Natsu even said that he didnt hate the void. This is all too good. You did a fantabulous job (i just made that word up cause no existing word can properly describe how awesome this is) I cannot wait for more!
7/1/2020 c1 NaluLover
I love how you describe the abyss. We don't find out until the end that Zeref is behind the dark place that Natsu is in, but you can feel his despair. I also liked Lucy's knowing bow much exact time passed. This was great
I love how you describe the abyss. We don't find out until the end that Zeref is behind the dark place that Natsu is in, but you can feel his despair. I also liked Lucy's knowing bow much exact time passed. This was great
7/1/2020 c1 20ShanaHollows
OH MY GAWD!
I have read this three times and I love the depth of it every time I pick up something new! What a sweet and romantic idea!
My favourite line (although you have many, incredible, MEMORABLE lines in this first chapter) has got to be "Let me keep this". The desperation that's implied stopped my heart. I think you did an amazing job describing how 'nothing' he was, only vaguely aware that he had a conscious, let alone the ability to speak and interact with the outside world. And his memory of sleeping with Lucy for the first time...AH!
VERY well done! I am really looking forward to reading the rest of your prompts! MUCH LOVE!
~Shana~
20ShanaHollowsOH MY GAWD!
I have read this three times and I love the depth of it every time I pick up something new! What a sweet and romantic idea!
My favourite line (although you have many, incredible, MEMORABLE lines in this first chapter) has got to be "Let me keep this". The desperation that's implied stopped my heart. I think you did an amazing job describing how 'nothing' he was, only vaguely aware that he had a conscious, let alone the ability to speak and interact with the outside world. And his memory of sleeping with Lucy for the first time...AH!
VERY well done! I am really looking forward to reading the rest of your prompts! MUCH LOVE!
~Shana~