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7/15/2020 c10 Hetwaszoietsals
Welcome to the team Ziva!

Fun story!
7/14/2020 c10 17DS2010
Oh boy working together and sleeping together
7/12/2020 c9 DS2010
Damn Tony can't win
7/12/2020 c8 DS2010
I agree with Tony crazy chick
7/12/2020 c7 Hetwaszoietsals
Just found this story... love it!
7/10/2020 c7 Guest
This is the kind of story that makes people hate Ziva more. She is arrogant, cocky and a bully. I love Ziva. She is my favorite character but you made her obnoxious and irritating on this story. Making me hate her! She's actingkme she owns the place and they way she treats people esp Tony is awful. I hate this story
7/11/2020 c8 Natali Rempel Drews
I loved, i need more!
7/11/2020 c8 1Acrwdof1
I DO like your story. But I do have a concern. I presume this is going to end up as a TIVA love story. You’ve shown the definite attraction between the two, but in order for love to form, you’ve got to respect your partner. Currently, the way you are starting to write Tony, he is coming off a bit like a buffoon. We know Ziva is highly skilled, but so is Tony in his own right. He was a top notch homicide detective in Baltimore, as well as being able to bring down the Malacuso crime family by himself while undercover. Please write him so that Ziva will actually respect him and trust him to have her six. There IS a reason why he is Gibbs SFA. Remember, he PLAYS the clown to get people to underestimate hum, he is not really a clown, but a dedicated professional.
7/10/2020 c7 BKeh
Excellent chapter
7/8/2020 c5 Mar91
A very good chapter
7/9/2020 c7 17DS2010
Well done turning Michael into the bad guy it really worked with his personality.
7/8/2020 c6 DS2010
that was some way to wake up
7/8/2020 c5 DS2010
Damn Ziva getting Tony in all sorts of trouble and Michael acting like he is completely jealous.
7/7/2020 c4 DS2010
Have to love Tony covering for Ziva.
7/5/2020 c2 Mar91
A very good chapter
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