for The Zero and the Demon's Daughter8/26/2021 c3 MaxHD2490
I think the Author is in writer's block for months now, I can't blame him now since RL most likely stressed him out from the last update.
I think the Author is in writer's block for months now, I can't blame him now since RL most likely stressed him out from the last update.
5/30/2021 c3 
2DodemGM
Is it possible to have Red Hare? personally, I associate Lingqi taking her father's horse as a sort of token rather than his halberd, but that's just me, also it would be hard to explain how it got there. Another thing, about Diaochan. As far as I'm aware, she served more as a concubine and back those days, it was pretty usual to have a wife and a concubine (at least in the higher echelons of society if I recall correctly). So Lu Bu wouldn't be unfaithful in those sets of standards.
2DodemGMIs it possible to have Red Hare? personally, I associate Lingqi taking her father's horse as a sort of token rather than his halberd, but that's just me, also it would be hard to explain how it got there. Another thing, about Diaochan. As far as I'm aware, she served more as a concubine and back those days, it was pretty usual to have a wife and a concubine (at least in the higher echelons of society if I recall correctly). So Lu Bu wouldn't be unfaithful in those sets of standards.
2/27/2021 c3 5Z2010Deadmeat
It sounds like you are struggling a lot because you aren't having fun writing as much as you used to. When it comes down to it, its hard to write fanfics out of personal motivation. At first we do it because we have this deep love for the fandoms, but after a while if we strike gold on a story and get tons of reception our fanfics turn more into "for our fans" instead of "for us". Which by no means there's nothing wrong with creating something others love but if your not having fun writing it, there's nothing wrong with admitting you need a break.
You aren't being paid to do this, you do it for the fun of it.
I could be wrong about this, and if I am I'm sorry for my assumption. I hope you find the motivation that'll help you with your writing if nothing else.
5Z2010DeadmeatIt sounds like you are struggling a lot because you aren't having fun writing as much as you used to. When it comes down to it, its hard to write fanfics out of personal motivation. At first we do it because we have this deep love for the fandoms, but after a while if we strike gold on a story and get tons of reception our fanfics turn more into "for our fans" instead of "for us". Which by no means there's nothing wrong with creating something others love but if your not having fun writing it, there's nothing wrong with admitting you need a break.
You aren't being paid to do this, you do it for the fun of it.
I could be wrong about this, and if I am I'm sorry for my assumption. I hope you find the motivation that'll help you with your writing if nothing else.
1/2/2021 c2 Ok
This is good... More
This is good... More
9/2/2020 c2 Kaioo
The thing with Lu Bu and Diao Chan wasn't an affair. Diao Chan would have been Lu Bu's concubine. Many noble men of that time period had multiple women...
Like, Cao Pi had 15 consorts.
Cao Pi and his elder brother Cao Ang as an example also had different mothers.
In Fact, Lu Bu had two wives and then Diao Chan as his concubine..
The thing with Lu Bu and Diao Chan wasn't an affair. Diao Chan would have been Lu Bu's concubine. Many noble men of that time period had multiple women...
Like, Cao Pi had 15 consorts.
Cao Pi and his elder brother Cao Ang as an example also had different mothers.
In Fact, Lu Bu had two wives and then Diao Chan as his concubine..
9/2/2020 c1 Kaioo
Why would floating be an oddity? Bruh, they get up to some crazy shit in dynasty warriors.
Why would floating be an oddity? Bruh, they get up to some crazy shit in dynasty warriors.
8/29/2020 c2 Decoyman
Interesting concept and story so far.
These "Louise summons the wrong person" stories have a lot of potential because of how you can compare what the various protagonists do, but unfortunately a lot of them don't get finished.
If you have the time, I'd recommend reading Gray Morality, to see what I mean. The canon divergence in that one is amazing. No canon divergence here so far, but maybe that'll change on the duel.
Lingqi is a good choice in my opinion. Her getting summoned here kind of unintentionally explains why she disappears after Lu Bu dies, and in the games she usually falls in love with who ever you befriend her as due to her being a lonely character.
Replying to your comments on chapter 1, yes I see you have a bunch of incomplete stories uploaded, I'd recommend sticking to one or two stories you're writing until they're finished before starting any new ones, or if one doesn't interest you anymore at least let it's followers know you won't be writing it anymore. I'm a bit biased since this is the story you've written that interests me most, so I'd say stick to this one. I'd also highly recommend watching/reading/playing whatever you're crossing over when writing a fanfic for it. Sounds like you're good on DW, but not so much on FoZ.
Good luck.
Interesting concept and story so far.
These "Louise summons the wrong person" stories have a lot of potential because of how you can compare what the various protagonists do, but unfortunately a lot of them don't get finished.
If you have the time, I'd recommend reading Gray Morality, to see what I mean. The canon divergence in that one is amazing. No canon divergence here so far, but maybe that'll change on the duel.
Lingqi is a good choice in my opinion. Her getting summoned here kind of unintentionally explains why she disappears after Lu Bu dies, and in the games she usually falls in love with who ever you befriend her as due to her being a lonely character.
Replying to your comments on chapter 1, yes I see you have a bunch of incomplete stories uploaded, I'd recommend sticking to one or two stories you're writing until they're finished before starting any new ones, or if one doesn't interest you anymore at least let it's followers know you won't be writing it anymore. I'm a bit biased since this is the story you've written that interests me most, so I'd say stick to this one. I'd also highly recommend watching/reading/playing whatever you're crossing over when writing a fanfic for it. Sounds like you're good on DW, but not so much on FoZ.
Good luck.
8/27/2020 c1 Guest
I could have said that it has potential, but since you're using DW9, then NOOOOOOOOOOO.
I could have said that it has potential, but since you're using DW9, then NOOOOOOOOOOO.
8/27/2020 c2 JustPassingBy
Nice chapter, very civil compared to most fics with ZNT cross-over you have no idea how tiring it is to read Louise just screaming and stuff.
A couple questions/ideas I'd like to ask about:
Will there be any attempt into rationalizing the 'Super-human feats' in Dynasty Warriors like summoning fire, lightning or ice or how they just man handle hundreds of fodder units in the battlefield?
I believe there's this trailer about a live-action Dynasty Warrior movie, that's probably not even real, in it they mentioned Musou-energy as a weird way to explain all that fantastic martial arts stuff happening.
Side-note don't the strategists use magic or trickery or whatever, I mean Chen-gong summons soldiers made of ink to fight from his scrolls while Zhuge Liang has a fan laser... just saying.
Overall it's a good premise, I do wonder how much of Lingqi's attitude is her own due to the runes, that issue is either glossed over or comes up at some point. But then again she really doesn't have anywhere else to go and is already used to serving under lords and ladies so it might not be that big of an issue.
Goodluck and stay safe, I'll be passingby again, later.
Nice chapter, very civil compared to most fics with ZNT cross-over you have no idea how tiring it is to read Louise just screaming and stuff.
A couple questions/ideas I'd like to ask about:
Will there be any attempt into rationalizing the 'Super-human feats' in Dynasty Warriors like summoning fire, lightning or ice or how they just man handle hundreds of fodder units in the battlefield?
I believe there's this trailer about a live-action Dynasty Warrior movie, that's probably not even real, in it they mentioned Musou-energy as a weird way to explain all that fantastic martial arts stuff happening.
Side-note don't the strategists use magic or trickery or whatever, I mean Chen-gong summons soldiers made of ink to fight from his scrolls while Zhuge Liang has a fan laser... just saying.
Overall it's a good premise, I do wonder how much of Lingqi's attitude is her own due to the runes, that issue is either glossed over or comes up at some point. But then again she really doesn't have anywhere else to go and is already used to serving under lords and ladies so it might not be that big of an issue.
Goodluck and stay safe, I'll be passingby again, later.
8/25/2020 c2 guest
Absolutely great chapter! I am really looking forward to more, well done!
Absolutely great chapter! I am really looking forward to more, well done!
8/25/2020 c2 Gordon Ramsay
Finally, some good fucking crossovers
Finally, some good fucking crossovers